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1/23/2016 c2 19SwordMasterZ
interesting usually America is the one that gets pregnent for some reason
11/6/2015 c2 godess bubbles
Please update soon!
1/29/2014 c2 5MomoPeachFlower
I doubt your going to continue this after 6 months but I would love to read the rest.
9/3/2013 c2 Guest
Please continue writing this story, it is really good and I really like it.
6/27/2013 c2 7Conetsu
OMG after all these months finally a second chapter! I'm so happy! Please continue!
1/19/2013 c1 Conetsu
Please continue! I want to know what countries the Hitachiin (sp?) twins are! Also please check out Ultimate Hetalia Interview.
12/28/2012 c1 Derpette
How did he give birth? Out of his butthole?
8/14/2012 c1 5xXcanadalovespancakesXx
Oh my gosh where the rest! Write more!
7/30/2012 c1 Wierdo0101
update soon! its great!
6/16/2012 c1 6Crysagi-Chan
Continue, it seems interesting.
6/13/2012 c1 5Warrior Chickenz
... Write more!
6/13/2012 c1 Don'tDreamItBeIt
I like this story, but you need to include less words in other languages. I don't wanna sound like some ignorant American, so I will tell you my reasoning behind it. It's just that, it really disrupts the flow of the story when I have to scroll down and read the translations. Instead, you should have them talk in English, and then through in some of their commonly used words in their language that most Hetalia fans already know (ex: yes, no, hi, bye, thank you, my god, stuff like that). But don't do whole sentences please. Thanks so much!

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