for Growing Up11/3/2022 c1 dpennell007
Well written. A sad one-shot but it was an interesting, plausible possibility..
Well written. A sad one-shot but it was an interesting, plausible possibility..
4/5/2021 c1 Guest
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11/7/2020 c1 
10LJ Summers
I enjoyed this a great deal. Love seeing Bella grow up rationally.
My favorite part, though, was when she went over the "keeping the puppy happy" routine. That. Was. Great. Thank you. :)
10LJ SummersI enjoyed this a great deal. Love seeing Bella grow up rationally.
My favorite part, though, was when she went over the "keeping the puppy happy" routine. That. Was. Great. Thank you. :)
6/10/2020 c1 LELEIA
Good character development!
Good character development!
4/24/2018 c1 GreenEyes-BlueCoke
I just read this I was searching through your other P&P stories. And it was one of the best twilight fanfics I've ever read and I don't even like twilight all that much. You're amazing, Never stop writingB-)
I just read this I was searching through your other P&P stories. And it was one of the best twilight fanfics I've ever read and I don't even like twilight all that much. You're amazing, Never stop writingB-)
3/10/2018 c1 VampCullenForever
I was never a Jacob lover but I still had to admit that your story of them was beautiful and really put Edward into his place.
I was never a Jacob lover but I still had to admit that your story of them was beautiful and really put Edward into his place.
8/3/2015 c1 17libaka
Why couldn't the real one have ended like this? Very well written and nice twist :)
17libakaWhy couldn't the real one have ended like this? Very well written and nice twist :)
9/28/2013 c1 2Gen-in-the-Eve
Having just read your Pride and Prejudice story I was a little surprised to realize that your only other story was Twilight. but I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I like that you had Bella grow up and realize the problems of her relationship with Edward while still being Bella. And Jake really is the much nicer guy, so kudos to accomplishing so much in such a short space.
2Gen-in-the-EveHaving just read your Pride and Prejudice story I was a little surprised to realize that your only other story was Twilight. but I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I like that you had Bella grow up and realize the problems of her relationship with Edward while still being Bella. And Jake really is the much nicer guy, so kudos to accomplishing so much in such a short space.
2/27/2013 c1 1HenzBee
I love this story! It always bugged me what the future for Bella and Jacob would have been if Alice had not seen Bella jump off the cliff and Edward never returned. It always makes me sad to think that Bella would never really be 100% happy with Jacob and Jacob would not be able to imprint on Nessie. So, thank you for this story!
1HenzBeeI love this story! It always bugged me what the future for Bella and Jacob would have been if Alice had not seen Bella jump off the cliff and Edward never returned. It always makes me sad to think that Bella would never really be 100% happy with Jacob and Jacob would not be able to imprint on Nessie. So, thank you for this story!
10/3/2012 c1 3Bugsy Potter
Second time I've read this. Seriously, it makes me cry every time. You write so well. And I'm kind of glad it's not a huge novel rewrite. It wrapped up everything so perfectly, all the way back to why Edward didn't come back. It gives your audience a lot of closure for the Jacob fans. Great, great job.
3Bugsy PotterSecond time I've read this. Seriously, it makes me cry every time. You write so well. And I'm kind of glad it's not a huge novel rewrite. It wrapped up everything so perfectly, all the way back to why Edward didn't come back. It gives your audience a lot of closure for the Jacob fans. Great, great job.
9/28/2012 c1 Lucy
Loved it... wish it went that way :)
Loved it... wish it went that way :)