for DarkSide9/28/2012 c14 Lover 3
AHHH! YOU KILLED HIM! :O
ITS SO AWSOME! ;D
AHHH! YOU KILLED HIM! :O
ITS SO AWSOME! ;D
9/18/2012 c13 tndsecretoperati
Cliffhanger
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Cliffhanger
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9/10/2012 c12 
1Kit-Frost of the comeing fire
Really good story so far just some minor spelling and grammar problems but over all good job
1Kit-Frost of the comeing fireReally good story so far just some minor spelling and grammar problems but over all good job
9/8/2012 c12 Guest
YEA MORE ACTION!"! and this is the longest first story ive read, i mean halfway there! Great story keep it going! ;D
YEA MORE ACTION!"! and this is the longest first story ive read, i mean halfway there! Great story keep it going! ;D
9/8/2012 c12 KukixWally Lover
YEA! this story keeps getting better and better! KEEP IT UPP! :D
YEA! this story keeps getting better and better! KEEP IT UPP! :D
8/21/2012 c1 Guest
Awsome!
Awsome!
8/8/2012 c10 Guest
Great idea to change the name of the story! AND I WOULD LOVE A SEQUEL!
Great idea to change the name of the story! AND I WOULD LOVE A SEQUEL!
8/8/2012 c10 tndsecreyoperati
I luv the new name, it suits the stroy ... yes a Sequel would be awsome.
I luv the new name, it suits the stroy ... yes a Sequel would be awsome.
8/2/2012 c9 KW lover
I like how you alays leve a cliffhanger#! Ps love the story so far, keep up the good work!
I like how you alays leve a cliffhanger#! Ps love the story so far, keep up the good work!
8/1/2012 c9 tndsecretoperati
Oh no u didn't , u did not just leave me hanging
Oh no u didn't , u did not just leave me hanging
7/22/2012 c8 Guest
Wow! Amazing chapter! (Just like all the rest of course :D) I love this story so much!
I think it's good that you leave cliff hangers because it gets everybody thinking about what's gonna happen. :)
Keep up the good work!
Wow! Amazing chapter! (Just like all the rest of course :D) I love this story so much!
I think it's good that you leave cliff hangers because it gets everybody thinking about what's gonna happen. :)
Keep up the good work!
7/15/2012 c7 Numbuh116ofTND
Now you have 9 comments ha
Now you have 9 comments ha
7/15/2012 c7 Numbuh 116
Please post soon when was this posted anyways plus I love that you played of kukis temper cool idea
Please post soon when was this posted anyways plus I love that you played of kukis temper cool idea
7/11/2012 c6 tndsecretoperati
Tndsecretoperative here, love the story... can't wait until tommorow
Tndsecretoperative here, love the story... can't wait until tommorow