for Daring, Nerve and Chivalry The Outtakes4/5/2020 c16 Porridge
When I tell you I screamed when I saw this notification I mean it.
I've been spending lockdown rereading all of your fanfics but tbh i do it at least twice a year anyway.
I loved it - even if my heart is shattered into tiny pieces
When I tell you I screamed when I saw this notification I mean it.
I've been spending lockdown rereading all of your fanfics but tbh i do it at least twice a year anyway.
I loved it - even if my heart is shattered into tiny pieces
4/3/2020 c16 Guest
Welcome back Candy,
I couldn't edit my earlier review so apologies for the anon!
Amazing writing as usual. I really felt the tedium and claustrophobia of being stuck inside without an end in sight... I'm guessing recent events are what prompted you're latest offerings and hope you are keeping well. The desperation to help her baby questioning her choices and berating herself for the mistakes she has made while trying to protect him are all emotions I know well. It was excellent thank you!
-Lea.
Welcome back Candy,
I couldn't edit my earlier review so apologies for the anon!
Amazing writing as usual. I really felt the tedium and claustrophobia of being stuck inside without an end in sight... I'm guessing recent events are what prompted you're latest offerings and hope you are keeping well. The desperation to help her baby questioning her choices and berating herself for the mistakes she has made while trying to protect him are all emotions I know well. It was excellent thank you!
-Lea.
4/3/2020 c16 
11BluLady
Oh my lord! I havent even read it yet I just couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you had written something new! I just wanted to say hello before I read and then review the chapter!
11BluLadyOh my lord! I havent even read it yet I just couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you had written something new! I just wanted to say hello before I read and then review the chapter!
1/31/2016 c14 LupinLover
I have to say that while I do enjoy all of your work this is one of my particularly favourite pieces so far. Here you have shown us a side to Anna that we have never really seen before - it's not sweet and innocent but it's not cruel either, most importantly it's from her point of view. We see this event that shaped how her life from that point on (ultimately leading to its end) from her eyes without the bias of Lupin or Sirius that we've had in the past. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and while I do love and miss the boys, I feel like chapters like this - the ones that are their stories but the other person's side - just give me more insight into this wonderful universe you've created. I can't wait for more!
I have to say that while I do enjoy all of your work this is one of my particularly favourite pieces so far. Here you have shown us a side to Anna that we have never really seen before - it's not sweet and innocent but it's not cruel either, most importantly it's from her point of view. We see this event that shaped how her life from that point on (ultimately leading to its end) from her eyes without the bias of Lupin or Sirius that we've had in the past. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and while I do love and miss the boys, I feel like chapters like this - the ones that are their stories but the other person's side - just give me more insight into this wonderful universe you've created. I can't wait for more!
1/18/2016 c14 32Louey06
This was wonderful. Poor Anna. I love/hate her. She does all those awful things to Remus, yet she is still sort of awesome. It's a hard line to walk, but Anna manages somehow. Very good chapter.
32Louey06This was wonderful. Poor Anna. I love/hate her. She does all those awful things to Remus, yet she is still sort of awesome. It's a hard line to walk, but Anna manages somehow. Very good chapter.
7/25/2014 c13 Bankai18
I Love, Love, Love character is so interesting and entertaining its a shame she doesn't get much screen time.
Thank you for the update and i hope to read more (especially Sirius and Electra,my faves).
I Love, Love, Love character is so interesting and entertaining its a shame she doesn't get much screen time.
Thank you for the update and i hope to read more (especially Sirius and Electra,my faves).
7/24/2014 c13 Louey06
Thank you for the ripping of my heart at the end, this was great. i love how you shwcased Electra and Anna. I never really thought abut Electra much to be honest. Anna interested me much mre. It was interesting to see what the girls get up to instead of the boys for once. Now I must wrap this up so can go and cry.
Thank you for the ripping of my heart at the end, this was great. i love how you shwcased Electra and Anna. I never really thought abut Electra much to be honest. Anna interested me much mre. It was interesting to see what the girls get up to instead of the boys for once. Now I must wrap this up so can go and cry.
7/24/2014 c13 11Padfoot24601
Fabulous. The dynamics here are brilliant. It's really interesting to see how in some ways their relationship mirrors Remus' and Sirius' except that here the distrust is thoroughly deserved
The first section is great! Normally I'd expect Anna to be the tender, motherly one so it's really sweet to see Electra taking that role for once. It really makes me like her.
Wow, I'm intrigued about Orestes' death now.
Sorry this is such a short review.
Pads xx
11Padfoot24601Fabulous. The dynamics here are brilliant. It's really interesting to see how in some ways their relationship mirrors Remus' and Sirius' except that here the distrust is thoroughly deserved
The first section is great! Normally I'd expect Anna to be the tender, motherly one so it's really sweet to see Electra taking that role for once. It really makes me like her.
Wow, I'm intrigued about Orestes' death now.
Sorry this is such a short review.
Pads xx
7/24/2014 c13 Starkid Mcfly
sorry, Im on my phone and am too lazy to log in!
This was, as usual, fantastic, and I think it says something about you as a writer that this was a chapter circling around two of your own creations that intrigued me just as much as it would have had it been about Remus and Sirius. I love both Electra and Anna because they're both such strong characters, and exploring their relationship like you did here was really interesting, and I had a very strange feeling in my stomach at the end, another sign of your excellent writing.
all in all, I thought this chapter was brilliant as usual!
Rocky xx
sorry, Im on my phone and am too lazy to log in!
This was, as usual, fantastic, and I think it says something about you as a writer that this was a chapter circling around two of your own creations that intrigued me just as much as it would have had it been about Remus and Sirius. I love both Electra and Anna because they're both such strong characters, and exploring their relationship like you did here was really interesting, and I had a very strange feeling in my stomach at the end, another sign of your excellent writing.
all in all, I thought this chapter was brilliant as usual!
Rocky xx
6/3/2013 c12 6Rayven49
I liked this. Never considered how young James and Lily were when she got pregnant with Harry. I like the informality of the conversation between James and Sirius, and how it almost devolves into darkness but doesn't quite get there.
Also, the line about it floating up the Thames in a basket was funny :)
Can't wait for more!
Yours,
Rayven
6Rayven49I liked this. Never considered how young James and Lily were when she got pregnant with Harry. I like the informality of the conversation between James and Sirius, and how it almost devolves into darkness but doesn't quite get there.
Also, the line about it floating up the Thames in a basket was funny :)
Can't wait for more!
Yours,
Rayven
2/4/2013 c12 17Snarky64
It's great. Another fine chapter - great interaction. How could Peter do it? *sigh*
17Snarky64It's great. Another fine chapter - great interaction. How could Peter do it? *sigh*
2/3/2013 c12 32Louey06
Very good! Poor Remus. He can't hold any liqour at all can he? Why he listens to his friends I'll never know. Very well done I enjoyed this!
32Louey06Very good! Poor Remus. He can't hold any liqour at all can he? Why he listens to his friends I'll never know. Very well done I enjoyed this!
12/2/2012 c11 Seraphina
Everytime I read Electra I imagine
Megan else?
Everytime I read Electra I imagine
Megan else?