for Part of Me8/24/2014 c1 amyheroesofolympus
omg.. jason was ooc but good story :) jason would never do that to piper in real life ( in the books )
omg.. jason was ooc but good story :) jason would never do that to piper in real life ( in the books )
2/3/2013 c1 Guest
I feel like giving the girl a nice slap. Can't wait to read the coming chapters!
I feel like giving the girl a nice slap. Can't wait to read the coming chapters!
7/23/2012 c1 make a sequel
make a sequel plzzzzzzz
but please dont pair her up with with a random dude or character cuz that would suck
make a sequel plzzzzzzz
but please dont pair her up with with a random dude or character cuz that would suck
6/30/2012 c1 
15snazzyflower
This isn't a flame, more like CC: I'm just going to say how Jason is OOC here. Because, I mean, I know the whole plot of your story relies on Jason doing what he does here, but in the books, he wouldn't be THAT MUCH of a douche. I mean, he's sorta a goodie-two shoes. He would never even dare to do that.
But it's fine in your story because your whole plot revolves around him being OOC.
Also, it's your story and FanFiction. :D
15snazzyflowerThis isn't a flame, more like CC: I'm just going to say how Jason is OOC here. Because, I mean, I know the whole plot of your story relies on Jason doing what he does here, but in the books, he wouldn't be THAT MUCH of a douche. I mean, he's sorta a goodie-two shoes. He would never even dare to do that.
But it's fine in your story because your whole plot revolves around him being OOC.
Also, it's your story and FanFiction. :D
6/29/2012 c1 7squirtlepokemon215
Stupid Jason! Wahhhh! Wahhhh! Stupid Jason! I thought you were better than that! :'( TT-TT:'(
7squirtlepokemon215Stupid Jason! Wahhhh! Wahhhh! Stupid Jason! I thought you were better than that! :'( TT-TT:'(
6/16/2012 c1 7arrowheaven
OH MY FRIGGIN GODS! MAKE A SEQUEL, MAKE A SEQUEL! I've never been this excited in my life! This is so greatly done, I beg you to carry on! PLEAAASEEE!
ThapolloandPercabeth4ever
xoxo
7arrowheavenOH MY FRIGGIN GODS! MAKE A SEQUEL, MAKE A SEQUEL! I've never been this excited in my life! This is so greatly done, I beg you to carry on! PLEAAASEEE!
ThapolloandPercabeth4ever
xoxo