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6/16/2012 c1 shizuka
somehow the drabble is cute x3

I really enjoyed it.

But i want to correct one German sentence (i'm german so the correction will be right)

The'one day' would be sound a lot better in german if you write 'eines Tages' and the word brother is supposed to write with a capital letter. 'Bruder' with wall and God it's the same a capital letter in the beginning would be perfect.

Greetings (:

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