8/6/2012 c1 1ClumsyTonks
Awesome!
Will you be adding to this story? I think a little daughter of Maria Hill's would be so kick ass :)
Awesome!
Will you be adding to this story? I think a little daughter of Maria Hill's would be so kick ass :)
7/16/2012 c1 Guest
HAHA. Amusing XD
I wonder if you have a follow up. That would be interesting.
Do keep writing :D
HAHA. Amusing XD
I wonder if you have a follow up. That would be interesting.
Do keep writing :D
7/16/2012 c1 12noukinav018
Loved it! Do keep writing! Very amusing to read. Do you have a follow up for it?
The idea sounds interesting to my own ears
Do keep writing!
Loved it! Do keep writing! Very amusing to read. Do you have a follow up for it?
The idea sounds interesting to my own ears
Do keep writing!
6/29/2012 c1 1Trinideanfan
Love it! Too bad it's a one shot. Absolutely adored Loki's protective nature and the thought of him being a father to a little girl is too much. You should really consider doing a sequel. Great job!
Love it! Too bad it's a one shot. Absolutely adored Loki's protective nature and the thought of him being a father to a little girl is too much. You should really consider doing a sequel. Great job!
6/22/2012 c1 Ravenn-chan
OOh! I LOVED this story! Totally sexy and stimulating and everything i could ask for in a Loki Slash story :P
OOh! I LOVED this story! Totally sexy and stimulating and everything i could ask for in a Loki Slash story :P
6/19/2012 c1 141letmetellyouaboutmyfeels
YES! THEY GET TO BE TOGETHER!
Ahem. Sorry. I tend to get a bit enthusiastic.
AND YES! COULSON IS ALIVE!
I love that guy.
Thanks for this sequel! I adored it!
YES! THEY GET TO BE TOGETHER!
Ahem. Sorry. I tend to get a bit enthusiastic.
AND YES! COULSON IS ALIVE!
I love that guy.
Thanks for this sequel! I adored it!
6/19/2012 c1 5Acrynie
Oh my god! This was fantastic! Everything is perfect, the storyline, the characters (not out of character for once), the writing! most of the time I hurt my eyes reading a fanfiction that makes the Avengers being too much out of character, especialy Loki who's a tought piece of work, but your story was creative and it still respects the original story. This was pure perfection, your description of the feelings is realy strong and beautifuly put! Thank you for this grand moment of reading and learning. Keep up the good job! )
Oh my god! This was fantastic! Everything is perfect, the storyline, the characters (not out of character for once), the writing! most of the time I hurt my eyes reading a fanfiction that makes the Avengers being too much out of character, especialy Loki who's a tought piece of work, but your story was creative and it still respects the original story. This was pure perfection, your description of the feelings is realy strong and beautifuly put! Thank you for this grand moment of reading and learning. Keep up the good job! )
6/16/2012 c1 9White Lioness Spirit
I loved it. Your writing is so descriptive and flows together perfectly. Amazing job!
I loved it. Your writing is so descriptive and flows together perfectly. Amazing job!
6/16/2012 c1 Cosmic Fool
Oh, this is fantastic. A really great read, I enjoyed it so much.
I like your style of writing and I love the pairing.
I'll keep an eye out for any up-coming stories from you. And I'm going to check out your previous work now.
It would be cool to see a future fic in which Loki and Maria return to Earth for some reason.
Oh, this is fantastic. A really great read, I enjoyed it so much.
I like your style of writing and I love the pairing.
I'll keep an eye out for any up-coming stories from you. And I'm going to check out your previous work now.
It would be cool to see a future fic in which Loki and Maria return to Earth for some reason.