for Legend of the Moon Queen9/8/2013 c16 Energywitch
Sorry about the previous review...my bad.
Well that explanation and reason hardly seems fair...
There's still so many things and looseends the inner scouts have to do in that dimension.
Sorry about the previous review...my bad.
Well that explanation and reason hardly seems fair...
There's still so many things and looseends the inner scouts have to do in that dimension.
9/5/2013 c15 Elyse
Just found your story and read all the chapters ) so far this is probably the best cross I have found that really goes into detail and is not rushed. Good work I love it and can't wait to read some more chapters! So *poke poke* write more! 3 I wanna know who the void is and why Sailor Pluto shut them out and why they are dying!
Just found your story and read all the chapters ) so far this is probably the best cross I have found that really goes into detail and is not rushed. Good work I love it and can't wait to read some more chapters! So *poke poke* write more! 3 I wanna know who the void is and why Sailor Pluto shut them out and why they are dying!
9/2/2013 c15 AnonymousZGirl
I don't know if you remember me but I hope you do, and well I hope that your doing okay and I really Hope to Read Chapter 16 when you post it.
it would be interesting if Queen Serenity got after Sailor Pluto for what she did by mistaking Sailor Moon and her friends for the enemy when clearly they are not.
any way please keep up the awesome job and please write chapter 16 when you can and don't rush but take your time, I'll understand if the next chapter might take a little while and I'm sure the next chapter will be worth the wait :)
I don't know if you remember me but I hope you do, and well I hope that your doing okay and I really Hope to Read Chapter 16 when you post it.
it would be interesting if Queen Serenity got after Sailor Pluto for what she did by mistaking Sailor Moon and her friends for the enemy when clearly they are not.
any way please keep up the awesome job and please write chapter 16 when you can and don't rush but take your time, I'll understand if the next chapter might take a little while and I'm sure the next chapter will be worth the wait :)
7/16/2013 c15 AnonymousZGirl
Hi its me, I really Hope you update soon and I hope everything is okay and any way Please keep up the Great job on this story :)
Hi its me, I really Hope you update soon and I hope everything is okay and any way Please keep up the Great job on this story :)
3/17/2013 c15 Yu Kazama
I'm glad you decided to keep the story going! _ The end of the chapter was a surprised, I wasn't expecting them to see themselves back in their own dimension...a good plot twist.
I'm glad you decided to keep the story going! _ The end of the chapter was a surprised, I wasn't expecting them to see themselves back in their own dimension...a good plot twist.
2/25/2013 c15 AnonymousZGirl
Awesome New Chapter!
the vortex must of went into the time and place they had first went through that vortex and Sailor Pluto must of did the same thing to there future selves while the girls were at that building that could make sense though it was kinda mean of Sailor Pluto not to know who they were...it would be neat if Haruka and Michiru knew that something wasn't right and went to the same building and didn't get there on time when the girls were send through to the other Universe but then Haruka and Michiru get send into that same universe but during a slow time lag and they end up there many many weeks and days later and in Saiyan bodies too and they meet up with Usagi during a run in with Nappa and as Nappa is about to hit Usagi saying he didn't need her pity when Haruka could come in like lightning speed and punch him hard in the gut for trying to harm the Princess cause that be a wild idea though I'm not sure if you like it I think I'm kinda hyper, it would be neat if when Sailor Pluto close the vortex thing that they made to go home that she gets in trouble by the Spirit of Queen Serenity who would know what happen to the girls and would tell Sailor Pluto those 'Aliens' were her daughter and the rest of the girls future selves that got send through a vortex and not knowing this Sailor Pluto would feel a shame of her actions and if she had known she wouldn't have done it and Queen Serenity would give her a warm smile and tell her she wasn't truly at fault and she only did what she thought was safe but she does hope they would return safe back to them...well that's what mostly I think Queen Serenity would say to Sailor Pluto...
it be funny if Haruka and Michiru if acted like bodyguards to Usagi and acted all protective of her but she would tell them they didn't have to cause she had train a lot since then and Haruka would at first be against of the idea of not protecting her 24/7 but then would see the new aura around Usagi that was the same but different at the same time and she would give her a warm smile and ruffle Usagi's head of hair and tell her okay but if any danger comes to harm her in any way she couldn't handle they will step in and protect her which Usagi will like give a tearful but not in a sad way but in a happy way smile to the two older girls XD I know weird idea but it just pop into my head and that and I think I might be a little hyper...
its only ideas really and if it helps you on future chapters you can use them if you like and if you don't like the ideas that's okay even if they are okay ideas I'll understand if you don't want to use them thought I would help a little and again I think I might be a little hyper and sorry if I'm talking too much I just really like this story and I'm happy to read the new chapters and I hope you do like my idea of Sailor Pluto talking with the spirit of Queen Serenity and Haruka and Michiru end up going to the same building and end up going through the vortex thing too but end up in a time lag and get there many weeks and days later, I guess Haruka and Michiru could of went there to the building after coming from some trip or something I think I forgot what Haruka and Michiru were doing before the girls went to the other universe...any way again sorry if I'm talking too much though and any way Keep up the Awesome Work even if you don't use my idea either you do or don't its okay I like Your Story its so Cool and I hope you like my ideas too even if I might of been a little hyper when it came out from my head...any way again Keep up the awesome job can't wait to read more of the next chapter :D
Awesome New Chapter!
the vortex must of went into the time and place they had first went through that vortex and Sailor Pluto must of did the same thing to there future selves while the girls were at that building that could make sense though it was kinda mean of Sailor Pluto not to know who they were...it would be neat if Haruka and Michiru knew that something wasn't right and went to the same building and didn't get there on time when the girls were send through to the other Universe but then Haruka and Michiru get send into that same universe but during a slow time lag and they end up there many many weeks and days later and in Saiyan bodies too and they meet up with Usagi during a run in with Nappa and as Nappa is about to hit Usagi saying he didn't need her pity when Haruka could come in like lightning speed and punch him hard in the gut for trying to harm the Princess cause that be a wild idea though I'm not sure if you like it I think I'm kinda hyper, it would be neat if when Sailor Pluto close the vortex thing that they made to go home that she gets in trouble by the Spirit of Queen Serenity who would know what happen to the girls and would tell Sailor Pluto those 'Aliens' were her daughter and the rest of the girls future selves that got send through a vortex and not knowing this Sailor Pluto would feel a shame of her actions and if she had known she wouldn't have done it and Queen Serenity would give her a warm smile and tell her she wasn't truly at fault and she only did what she thought was safe but she does hope they would return safe back to them...well that's what mostly I think Queen Serenity would say to Sailor Pluto...
it be funny if Haruka and Michiru if acted like bodyguards to Usagi and acted all protective of her but she would tell them they didn't have to cause she had train a lot since then and Haruka would at first be against of the idea of not protecting her 24/7 but then would see the new aura around Usagi that was the same but different at the same time and she would give her a warm smile and ruffle Usagi's head of hair and tell her okay but if any danger comes to harm her in any way she couldn't handle they will step in and protect her which Usagi will like give a tearful but not in a sad way but in a happy way smile to the two older girls XD I know weird idea but it just pop into my head and that and I think I might be a little hyper...
its only ideas really and if it helps you on future chapters you can use them if you like and if you don't like the ideas that's okay even if they are okay ideas I'll understand if you don't want to use them thought I would help a little and again I think I might be a little hyper and sorry if I'm talking too much I just really like this story and I'm happy to read the new chapters and I hope you do like my idea of Sailor Pluto talking with the spirit of Queen Serenity and Haruka and Michiru end up going to the same building and end up going through the vortex thing too but end up in a time lag and get there many weeks and days later, I guess Haruka and Michiru could of went there to the building after coming from some trip or something I think I forgot what Haruka and Michiru were doing before the girls went to the other universe...any way again sorry if I'm talking too much though and any way Keep up the Awesome Work even if you don't use my idea either you do or don't its okay I like Your Story its so Cool and I hope you like my ideas too even if I might of been a little hyper when it came out from my head...any way again Keep up the awesome job can't wait to read more of the next chapter :D
2/25/2013 c15 
2Energy witch
YES! You decided to continue it!
Any who, I think finding a way back to their universe is the least of their problems considering how they been living on planet Vegeta, there's going to be many complications considering the outcome in the further future.
2Energy witchYES! You decided to continue it!
Any who, I think finding a way back to their universe is the least of their problems considering how they been living on planet Vegeta, there's going to be many complications considering the outcome in the further future.
2/25/2013 c15 1sunshinekc
Yes, a new chapter! I thought it was abandoned. You just made my day. Can't wait till the next chapter.
1sunshinekcYes, a new chapter! I thought it was abandoned. You just made my day. Can't wait till the next chapter.
2/23/2013 c14 AnonymousZGirl
I Still Love this story, I had went to see if there was anything new besides Chapter 15 before but then I notice it wasn't there any more and you must of taken it off but you might work on a new Chapter 15 some time, I can't wait to read it and see how Nappa acts to Usagi's kindness my day at first was a little sad and not good before cause one of the stories on I was reading before seems not to be on here any more and I hope that maybe the person who writes it will put it back hopefully but its nice to know your story is still on here and I can't wait to read the next chapter Your story is wonderful and I hope to read more of it some time when you have time to work on it and I'm sure your busy with other things but any way keep up the awesome job :)
I Still Love this story, I had went to see if there was anything new besides Chapter 15 before but then I notice it wasn't there any more and you must of taken it off but you might work on a new Chapter 15 some time, I can't wait to read it and see how Nappa acts to Usagi's kindness my day at first was a little sad and not good before cause one of the stories on I was reading before seems not to be on here any more and I hope that maybe the person who writes it will put it back hopefully but its nice to know your story is still on here and I can't wait to read the next chapter Your story is wonderful and I hope to read more of it some time when you have time to work on it and I'm sure your busy with other things but any way keep up the awesome job :)
12/12/2012 c15 AnonymousZGirl
Well thats good to hear :)
its good to hear from you and know that your working on the next Chapters :D
well Keep up the Awesome Work :D
Well thats good to hear :)
its good to hear from you and know that your working on the next Chapters :D
well Keep up the Awesome Work :D
12/10/2012 c15 Darkitty04
I'm so sad to see you want to stop writing this story :(
Though there were some grammar mistakes along the way it wasn't so bad as to distract from the story itself. I enjoyed your fic a lot and hope you won't give up on it.
Plus, practice makes perfect and in time you will see that grammar will no longer pose a problem.
Hope to see a new update from you soon, happy writing!
I'm so sad to see you want to stop writing this story :(
Though there were some grammar mistakes along the way it wasn't so bad as to distract from the story itself. I enjoyed your fic a lot and hope you won't give up on it.
Plus, practice makes perfect and in time you will see that grammar will no longer pose a problem.
Hope to see a new update from you soon, happy writing!
12/10/2012 c9 Darkitty04
Love this story, just started reading your fic and got hooked.
I find the story to be more realistic then usual crossovers in this genre because you actually exploit the brutal saiyan side, and adapt the girls to it.
Bardock and Makoto work so well together and the way they interact is wonderful, I must admit, I'm in love with this couple.
I laughed out loud at the fraze " Makoto thought nothing worse could happen. Thus challenged the universe obliged, and her scouter beeped."
Love this story, just started reading your fic and got hooked.
I find the story to be more realistic then usual crossovers in this genre because you actually exploit the brutal saiyan side, and adapt the girls to it.
Bardock and Makoto work so well together and the way they interact is wonderful, I must admit, I'm in love with this couple.
I laughed out loud at the fraze " Makoto thought nothing worse could happen. Thus challenged the universe obliged, and her scouter beeped."