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8/27/2014 c1 75Helena Dax
LOL, great, it made me smile XD
5/8/2014 c1 1Clara Brighet
Oh that was funny! XD And very well written, too. Congratulations! Haha just the idea that the FBI would have an 'Intra-Agency Water Pistol Championship' cracks me up. x)
Thank you for writing this!
- Clara Brighet
12/10/2013 c1 5IWannaLightsaber
LOL That was really scary for a sec. ANd then I was shocked (nice move putting the prompt at the end...) So I had to go back and read it over again. And it made me laugh. :) Thanks and great job!
10/10/2013 c1 reader82
Great Story. What an unexpected turn. Amazing.
5/5/2013 c1 3HighOnAWindyHill
Hahaa that's brilliant lol! Soo clever! You did a really fantastic job with this:D Did not see that one coming! Definitely made me smile! :)
3/23/2013 c1 Guest
Great story!
2/24/2013 c1 Guest
Haha :)
9/12/2012 c1 Guest
That was brilliant! And yes, it definitely made me smile! :)
8/1/2012 c1 10Bonkers4Reid
Wow! That was impressive! I was like "what has Neal done?" then "why does he have a gun?" Great job at keeping readers guessing! Bravo.
7/5/2012 c1 10hannahsmetana
Brilliant! Really fun, clever twist.
7/1/2012 c1 102Arches67
funny :-)
6/29/2012 c1 6puellascribit5
Haha, wasn't expecting that! Great job. ;)
6/26/2012 c1 21Miran Anders
Nice! Had me really wondering there, for a moment - and I loved the resolve. Nicely done!


6/18/2012 c1 19Fierce Queen
Wow! I didn't expect that! You had me going for a minute ;) Good job!


6/18/2012 c1 EpikalStorms
Yeah, it made me smile. I take it the FBI agencies are all-round serious about Water Pistol Tournaments, huh?
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