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5/21/2014 c2 Guest
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz! Right more! this is so good and no character breaks, also i love how the story isn't going to fast. It is just amazing!
10/23/2013 c2 5MissDarkness101
I like it !
4/14/2013 c1 1vishous21
this is so amazing
3/10/2013 c2 emilyfridaythe13th
u should write more
12/19/2012 c2 269Dance Elle Dance
Wonderful fic. I love the original and am very excited to see what you do here. Hope to read more soon!
11/16/2012 c2 3SexyStardust
I eagerly await my chicken enchilada soup I have on the stove. The aroma is pure mouthwatering. Please update soon! Love it so far (:
10/22/2012 c2 9Slyly
:O Update soon. This is written beautifully, and I think you have Jason's personality in the right.

- Slyly
9/16/2012 c2 8BrilliantRed22
:(
8/12/2012 c2 kcrb0202
Nice
8/6/2012 c2 57doctor anthony
Fantastic work here my friend as always. Keep up the great work.
8/6/2012 c2 2ThePhantomismyLove
write more
8/5/2012 c1 7WastelandGhouls
This was great. But I'm confused. The story is already up and in full, but on another account?
8/4/2012 c2 SimCityLlamas
Just. . . JCODWSNBFKEDSOJ. Oh my Jashin, I frikin' love this story.
I can't wait (well, I could wait!) for the next chapter! I know it'll be great :DD
And it'll make me giggle like mad.

-SCL
8/4/2012 c2 15xxKhaleesixx
Uh oh, Avril you've just put yourself in a world of trouble!
8/4/2012 c2 kopycat101
That was INTENSE! 8O

I'm surprised that Danny never fainted from the pain and bloodloss...
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