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6TotalGeek17
I love this! I like how Calypso and Leo arent a thing in this. It is just to weird to think about.
Please continue!
Total Geek17
P.S. Great last paragraph. My heart stopped. Percabeth forever!
6TotalGeek17I love this! I like how Calypso and Leo arent a thing in this. It is just to weird to think about.
Please continue!
Total Geek17
P.S. Great last paragraph. My heart stopped. Percabeth forever!
8/9/2012 c5 4JuneTwentieth
Cosmos is getting quite interesting now. I wonder what she did. Hmm...though I find it hard to believe the gods would ever be remorseful for anything they did. I mean, a bunch of Apollo's lovers and offspring died, yet in the Titan's Curse he was all cheery and happy. Though maybe because Venus sees Cosmos is important or something and she might affect the future or...
I agree with her. Piper is doing fine with the Greeks and Romans. They haven't declared war. That's all I can ask for.
Oh, and you have a lot of errors in the story. They're kind of hard to spot, or just easy to ignore. Such as, "She nodded, vigorously." There shouldn't be a comma. Also, you switched from past to present tense and vice versa a few times last chapter.
Also, concerning Johnathan, if he's a friend of Calypso, but in his twenties, how could he even meet Calypso? He couldn't have been alive back in Greek mythology, right? Calypso was trapped on Ogygia.
The title, "The Warrior Goddess," I find that a bit...contradictory. If the goddess in the summary mentioned is the same as the Warrior Goddess, how is a warrior goddess going to be the goddess of harmony and order? Harmony and order seem to be the sort-of opposite of a warrior. Unless they're not the same person.
Leo-Calypso is a very...interesting pairing. Mm, oh well. It's not like it's an insane couple. And it's the story, not the pairing. I can also understand why Leo would be smitten with Calypso, except for the fact his two previous crushes were both tough and confident- as Leo worded it, "someone who could stomp someone else on both the ball court and the battlefield" or something like that- and that isn't exactly how Calypso would be described.
Anyway, I will keep waiting for updates even though I'm supposed to be writing chapter eight of Complex Supernova and it's probably going to be late again.
-Priscilla X. Silver
4JuneTwentiethCosmos is getting quite interesting now. I wonder what she did. Hmm...though I find it hard to believe the gods would ever be remorseful for anything they did. I mean, a bunch of Apollo's lovers and offspring died, yet in the Titan's Curse he was all cheery and happy. Though maybe because Venus sees Cosmos is important or something and she might affect the future or...
I agree with her. Piper is doing fine with the Greeks and Romans. They haven't declared war. That's all I can ask for.
Oh, and you have a lot of errors in the story. They're kind of hard to spot, or just easy to ignore. Such as, "She nodded, vigorously." There shouldn't be a comma. Also, you switched from past to present tense and vice versa a few times last chapter.
Also, concerning Johnathan, if he's a friend of Calypso, but in his twenties, how could he even meet Calypso? He couldn't have been alive back in Greek mythology, right? Calypso was trapped on Ogygia.
The title, "The Warrior Goddess," I find that a bit...contradictory. If the goddess in the summary mentioned is the same as the Warrior Goddess, how is a warrior goddess going to be the goddess of harmony and order? Harmony and order seem to be the sort-of opposite of a warrior. Unless they're not the same person.
Leo-Calypso is a very...interesting pairing. Mm, oh well. It's not like it's an insane couple. And it's the story, not the pairing. I can also understand why Leo would be smitten with Calypso, except for the fact his two previous crushes were both tough and confident- as Leo worded it, "someone who could stomp someone else on both the ball court and the battlefield" or something like that- and that isn't exactly how Calypso would be described.
Anyway, I will keep waiting for updates even though I'm supposed to be writing chapter eight of Complex Supernova and it's probably going to be late again.
-Priscilla X. Silver
8/9/2012 c4 JuneTwentieth
Hmm. Zoë Nightshade was one of the Hesperides, yet she got scratched from history. I was reminded of that when the fic stated how Cosmos wasn't there in mythology.
Maybe for all I know, she's both Greek and Roman, which is why she's hidden. I mean, Thalia and Jason...Hera said it had never happened before that a Greek and Roman were born into the same family, so the two had to be separated so the Greeks and Romans wouldn't find out then.
I didn't even realise this story was updated. I'll put it on alerts. And I'll have to reread a bit of this to jog my memory...
-Priscilla X. Silver
Hmm. Zoë Nightshade was one of the Hesperides, yet she got scratched from history. I was reminded of that when the fic stated how Cosmos wasn't there in mythology.
Maybe for all I know, she's both Greek and Roman, which is why she's hidden. I mean, Thalia and Jason...Hera said it had never happened before that a Greek and Roman were born into the same family, so the two had to be separated so the Greeks and Romans wouldn't find out then.
I didn't even realise this story was updated. I'll put it on alerts. And I'll have to reread a bit of this to jog my memory...
-Priscilla X. Silver
7/22/2012 c4 Guest
I love this story!
I love this story!
7/20/2012 c4 13Lex Fowler
Wow. That's intense. I really like the sarcasm, and the sudden rift between Annabeth and Percy. Not that I don't like Percabeth, but it makes it seem more real. Great job!
13Lex FowlerWow. That's intense. I really like the sarcasm, and the sudden rift between Annabeth and Percy. Not that I don't like Percabeth, but it makes it seem more real. Great job!
7/15/2012 c3 JuneTwentieth
You reviewed my story, and you did put content in it, so I thought it would be fair enough to review one of your stories. I'm currently too lazy to log in, and an iPad isn't the best for managing my account. Unreliable, so yeah.
Anyway, it's a really good story. "They're called snow." I laughed at that part. Calypso kind of reminds me of Rapunzel in Tangled, after she just got out of her tower. I don't think Calypso's trying to do intentional harm to the Percabeth relationship, but she seems so innocent and naive that way, like Rue from the Hunger Games (these days, I've read so much one person reminds me of another person...). I do wonder how Calypso got to Percy's location, though.
With the little dreams, with Hera, I got confused between reality and the dreams. Also, the story moves a little too quickly. But it's really good. I was also interested at the way the ship was maneuvered. Oh, Leo. I love him. So funny.
Dear, dear Annabeth. I'm beginning to imagine her stabbing Calypso...hey, now that Calypso is off Ogygia, is she still immortal? I'd guess she is, since she would technically be a Titaness, albeit not a very powerful one. With Calypso's way viewing the world, it reminds me of Hazel, being from the 40s. Glad she made a reappearance. I also liked Mrs. O'Leary's appearance. I don't know about the Argo II size, but I'm not sure if something the size of a garbage truck could rock the boat. Maybe. -_-
Hera. Figures. Who else would it be?
Cosmos and Calypso seem a bit like each other...beautiful, and really nice, and gentle, and their names being with a C...while I find Cosmos a little too...I don't know, maybe too nice? That's probably my sister's influence. She pretty much doesn't like people who are way too nice. But she seems to fit in well with her era.
Keep writing!
You reviewed my story, and you did put content in it, so I thought it would be fair enough to review one of your stories. I'm currently too lazy to log in, and an iPad isn't the best for managing my account. Unreliable, so yeah.
Anyway, it's a really good story. "They're called snow." I laughed at that part. Calypso kind of reminds me of Rapunzel in Tangled, after she just got out of her tower. I don't think Calypso's trying to do intentional harm to the Percabeth relationship, but she seems so innocent and naive that way, like Rue from the Hunger Games (these days, I've read so much one person reminds me of another person...). I do wonder how Calypso got to Percy's location, though.
With the little dreams, with Hera, I got confused between reality and the dreams. Also, the story moves a little too quickly. But it's really good. I was also interested at the way the ship was maneuvered. Oh, Leo. I love him. So funny.
Dear, dear Annabeth. I'm beginning to imagine her stabbing Calypso...hey, now that Calypso is off Ogygia, is she still immortal? I'd guess she is, since she would technically be a Titaness, albeit not a very powerful one. With Calypso's way viewing the world, it reminds me of Hazel, being from the 40s. Glad she made a reappearance. I also liked Mrs. O'Leary's appearance. I don't know about the Argo II size, but I'm not sure if something the size of a garbage truck could rock the boat. Maybe. -_-
Hera. Figures. Who else would it be?
Cosmos and Calypso seem a bit like each other...beautiful, and really nice, and gentle, and their names being with a C...while I find Cosmos a little too...I don't know, maybe too nice? That's probably my sister's influence. She pretty much doesn't like people who are way too nice. But she seems to fit in well with her era.
Keep writing!
6/19/2012 c1 13Lex Fowler
I like your idea. You are writing very well. Keep up the good work! It's very original.
13Lex FowlerI like your idea. You are writing very well. Keep up the good work! It's very original.