
6/10/2015 c22 Alvinthechipmunk
* gulps* not good
* gulps* not good
6/10/2015 c20 Alvinthechipmunk
Well dis is interesting
Well dis is interesting
6/10/2015 c19 Alvinthechipmunk
Great now everyone except britt will hate me
Great now everyone except britt will hate me
6/10/2015 c18 Alvinthechipmunk
Uh oh* gulps
Uh oh* gulps
6/9/2015 c17 Alvinthechipmunk
Whoa
Whoa
6/9/2015 c16 Alvinthechipmunk
Are we havin 1, twins, triplets, quads, quins or sixtuplets
Are we havin 1, twins, triplets, quads, quins or sixtuplets
6/8/2015 c11 Alvinthechipmunk
Wait shes gonna break up with me?* tail sways
Wait shes gonna break up with me?* tail sways
6/8/2015 c10 Alvinthechipmunk
Ewww spare me da details ok
Ewww spare me da details ok
1/29/2015 c66 Guest
Very great, sweet and touching story. Of course it could be better and there was a lot of things that bothered me , but it still an amazing story. Now excuse me , I have to read the next sequel which I'm sure will be as good
Very great, sweet and touching story. Of course it could be better and there was a lot of things that bothered me , but it still an amazing story. Now excuse me , I have to read the next sequel which I'm sure will be as good
1/29/2015 c63 Guest
Another touching chapter, and I'm sure the next will be more, let's prepare the tissues!
Another touching chapter, and I'm sure the next will be more, let's prepare the tissues!
1/28/2015 c56 Guest
Again ...this chapter gave me tears of happiness :') you're a great writer , man !
Again ...this chapter gave me tears of happiness :') you're a great writer , man !
1/28/2015 c51 Guest
Ok ...I love this story so far , no ,...I LOVE this story ! But I really HATE how you make Brittany look like or feel like Alvin's slave, for me it seems immoral and inappropriate, I think the man and his wife must have the same rights (I'm a man by the way ), I know they're chipmunks and all, but still that's bothering me A LOT , but I'm still gonna finish this story anyway
Ok ...I love this story so far , no ,...I LOVE this story ! But I really HATE how you make Brittany look like or feel like Alvin's slave, for me it seems immoral and inappropriate, I think the man and his wife must have the same rights (I'm a man by the way ), I know they're chipmunks and all, but still that's bothering me A LOT , but I'm still gonna finish this story anyway
1/27/2015 c37 Guest
This chapter really made me cry of happiness! Tears are on my face right now !
This chapter really made me cry of happiness! Tears are on my face right now !
7/13/2014 c60 Guest
Okay well I'm addicted to the chipmunks and now I'm addicted to your chapters lol man even though I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't like sining sensation chipmunks right ? I'm twelve so it counts right ? Even if two of them were sucked in a vacuum floded Dave's house ate Theodore poo and is always having someone saying "clam it sudsii" haha wow I really do need to work on my humer lol ya that probably wasn't funny either was it ? You know what I talk to much I didn't even take the pleaser to say my name , it's Chelsey peters but my freinds say that I act a lot like brittany so just say Britt for short hehe well as much as I would hate to stop tal- oh who am I kiding I never shut up lol I'm like a chiwawa that talks non stop yap yap yap lol well gotta go but I'll review again soon by the way
I'm just as fond of third person as you , third person (fond of being fond of it now!)
Bey ... Um ... Uh ... Sorry never cought your name um well I think I'll just say alvin since you seem simar to him hehehe well bey and BTW third person (just as fond of it) lol ; ) 3
Okay well I'm addicted to the chipmunks and now I'm addicted to your chapters lol man even though I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't like sining sensation chipmunks right ? I'm twelve so it counts right ? Even if two of them were sucked in a vacuum floded Dave's house ate Theodore poo and is always having someone saying "clam it sudsii" haha wow I really do need to work on my humer lol ya that probably wasn't funny either was it ? You know what I talk to much I didn't even take the pleaser to say my name , it's Chelsey peters but my freinds say that I act a lot like brittany so just say Britt for short hehe well as much as I would hate to stop tal- oh who am I kiding I never shut up lol I'm like a chiwawa that talks non stop yap yap yap lol well gotta go but I'll review again soon by the way
I'm just as fond of third person as you , third person (fond of being fond of it now!)
Bey ... Um ... Uh ... Sorry never cought your name um well I think I'll just say alvin since you seem simar to him hehehe well bey and BTW third person (just as fond of it) lol ; ) 3
4/30/2014 c32 callie
im a critic somtyms jst ask around,but fr wunce i surpport u NO MORE FLAMERS!
im a critic somtyms jst ask around,but fr wunce i surpport u NO MORE FLAMERS!