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186ProfessorSquirrell
I'm a Sirius/Marlene shipper but this was really well written and I can see how she would be jealous of Frank. The way you've characterized Marlene is kind of similar to how I imagine her. I really like the use of repetition. It totally works and the last line is just heartbreakingly sad. Nice job :)
186ProfessorSquirrellI'm a Sirius/Marlene shipper but this was really well written and I can see how she would be jealous of Frank. The way you've characterized Marlene is kind of similar to how I imagine her. I really like the use of repetition. It totally works and the last line is just heartbreakingly sad. Nice job :)