for Kyo's Stroll in the Woods2/9/2013 c1 
8Dreamer372
OMGOMGOMG! I HATE MY FANGIRLINESSSSSSS! I LOVE THIS STORY THOUGH, BUT OMG OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
8Dreamer372OMGOMGOMG! I HATE MY FANGIRLINESSSSSSS! I LOVE THIS STORY THOUGH, BUT OMG OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
7/25/2012 c1 Ritsikas
Wow! I was sure, when reading the summery that it will be some mary sue thing that is full of depressing things and stuff. But the idea is great! Very creative ;) This would make a good long story if you keep it as good as this chapter was :)
One thing I dont like maybe is the OCs name. Its to ... americish (?) Others are all Asian and that name just doesnt fit, but thats just me :)
But cant see how Bree could hold herself from hugging Kyo :D I myself, am a huge hug-holic, specialt when someone saves me!
Wow! I was sure, when reading the summery that it will be some mary sue thing that is full of depressing things and stuff. But the idea is great! Very creative ;) This would make a good long story if you keep it as good as this chapter was :)
One thing I dont like maybe is the OCs name. Its to ... americish (?) Others are all Asian and that name just doesnt fit, but thats just me :)
But cant see how Bree could hold herself from hugging Kyo :D I myself, am a huge hug-holic, specialt when someone saves me!
7/9/2012 c1 Guest
its awsome
its awsome
6/28/2012 c1 1CrimsonMutilation
I love it! but she kinda reminds me of a crybaby. No judgement; just observing :). Please update soon!
1CrimsonMutilationI love it! but she kinda reminds me of a crybaby. No judgement; just observing :). Please update soon!
6/23/2012 c1 Rachell
Worst thing ive ever read in my life :P
Worst thing ive ever read in my life :P