for She Must Be Dealt With3/20/2024 c16 Rome4
Pretty please finish this story. Thats one hell of a cliffhanger. i l9ve all your stories.
Pretty please finish this story. Thats one hell of a cliffhanger. i l9ve all your stories.
1/31/2024 c16 Guest
Love this, but why didn’t you post anything again come on I’m desperate for the story to have an end
Love this, but why didn’t you post anything again come on I’m desperate for the story to have an end
7/9/2023 c2 celajwhitney123gmail.com
I think I have read this before but years ago. I don't remember much so here I go again!
I think I have read this before but years ago. I don't remember much so here I go again!
12/5/2022 c16 
2XxFantasyFiascoxX
This is amazing! I can’t wait to read more. You’ve got me on my toes plot-wise! I would love to see Bella really shake off that attitude and embrace her humanity. I would also like to see Jasper embrace his vampiric side. It’s evident that both want what the other so willingly avoids and I’d like to see them embrace their less familiar sides in an effort to get to that middle ground! Great writing!
2XxFantasyFiascoxXThis is amazing! I can’t wait to read more. You’ve got me on my toes plot-wise! I would love to see Bella really shake off that attitude and embrace her humanity. I would also like to see Jasper embrace his vampiric side. It’s evident that both want what the other so willingly avoids and I’d like to see them embrace their less familiar sides in an effort to get to that middle ground! Great writing!
8/9/2022 c16 EilonwyOfAvalon
I’m only following this story in the off chance it gets continued…or even finished…I’ll be notified. Given the fact it took eight years to post sixteen chapters (the most recent being two years ago), I have low expectations. I get that real life takes precedence. Nearly every fanfic writer pleads it in their author notes. Really, I get it and absolutely agree. But why start a story without an idea of how it’ll be wrapped up? If you have the outline, why not just finish writing it?
It’s a shame; this story had potential. I enjoyed most of what I read.
I’m only following this story in the off chance it gets continued…or even finished…I’ll be notified. Given the fact it took eight years to post sixteen chapters (the most recent being two years ago), I have low expectations. I get that real life takes precedence. Nearly every fanfic writer pleads it in their author notes. Really, I get it and absolutely agree. But why start a story without an idea of how it’ll be wrapped up? If you have the outline, why not just finish writing it?
It’s a shame; this story had potential. I enjoyed most of what I read.
7/19/2021 c16 10Windwoman
please come back to finish this story. you have the perfect Jasper and I would love the rest of the story!
10Windwomanplease come back to finish this story. you have the perfect Jasper and I would love the rest of the story!
2/7/2021 c16 Guest
Very sad that 5his is unfinished
Very sad that 5his is unfinished