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2/9/2013 c15 2RemusLupinTrash
I absolutely love this fic. I really wish you would continue it. I need to know if Jack and Ralph get together. They're my OTP.
10/22/2012 c14 14Hertram
Short review is short. Good job.
10/22/2012 c14 30Hammsters
Haha, this chapter was great, although I'm not exactly sure why Maurice sent Roger the elf thingamajig. A...50,000 word...novel...in a month. Just thinking of it gives me carpal tunnel. But I is curious, what the hell is it? And how do you sign up or whataver? Anyway, back on topic, great chapter update soon!
10/17/2012 c13 Sho Eisel
Hey! This story is so awesome! You had me squealing and giggling all over! All the characters are spot on, too. It sad we won't seeing much more Simon anymore, though. I love Simon \3 I'll be looking forward to next update!
P.S. I swear, Jack seems so gay! By the way, will Simon and Ralph ever meet? Keep rocking!

Hope
10/2/2012 c13 Hammsters
Haha, I friggin' love Maurice. This chapter was awesome, as chapters in this story tend to be, and I can't wait till you update again! You know what else I can't wait for? I can't wait for something to happen with Roger and Luna! I don't care that they're only eleven, something's gotta friggin' happen! And I find it deeply upsetting that Simon has been petrified. I thought you'd like to know. Okay, so that's pretty much all I gots ta say for now, so update soon!
10/2/2012 c13 11Painting Politics and Poland
Brilliant as usual.
10/1/2012 c13 14Hertram
I knew Roger would get caught :) I could totally see Maurice dramatically creeping around. And I like how Roger named his cat Nemesis.
9/29/2012 c12 11Painting Politics and Poland
Roger is such a sadist... I LOVE IT! Please update soon!
9/29/2012 c10 Painting Politics and Poland
Awwww, poor Maurice.
9/29/2012 c7 Painting Politics and Poland
"Roger, uncommunicative by nature, said nothing."

Isn't that the exact line in the book? Whether it is or not, it's a great line. I adore this story so far. It's bloody brilliant.
9/24/2012 c12 14Hertram
Ooh Roger's sadistic side...

I don't have much else to say. Herpaderp
8/29/2012 c11 30Hammsters
pff, hahahahaha! I love how easily Maurice forgave Roger and how excited Jack was when Ralph got hit with a bludger. It was awesome. I need some more Luna though. Luna is good. Roger is good. Luna AND Roger is spectacularness! So please, involve some of that shizz. Love the story, update soon!
8/27/2012 c11 14Hertram
Jack seems either weirdly competitive, obsessive, or sadistic. Oh lordie.

Maurice seems really enthusiastic about the weirdest things, but I guess that's just Maurice being Maurice.

I just caught one word error thing, "And then when one of the redhead twins knocked it away, he cursed and loked extremely disappointing." It should be disappointed. Sorry.
8/27/2012 c11 Fluffiet
Nooooo! Not a filler. D:
I liked it though...
YOU GOT TO UPDATE AGAIN SOON OR I'M GOING TO...
GOING TO...
*Dies almost*
8/24/2012 c7 1Pink Schmetterling
Haha, that was hilarious. I love the dynamics between Jack, Roger, and Maurice. Haha, the Ralph and Jack thing made me smile, especially when Jack muttered "unfortunately." Just so...childishly amazing, haha. Another awesome chapter. :D
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