for The Visitation6/13/2014 c2 
6Celynata
Wow this was absolutely fantastic! I've read so many Lokane fics that are just completely out of character for both Loki and Jane, but you've really managed to capture their characterizations well!
6CelynataWow this was absolutely fantastic! I've read so many Lokane fics that are just completely out of character for both Loki and Jane, but you've really managed to capture their characterizations well!
9/20/2013 c2 Guest
always love the lokane fics with a stalker loki
it's almost cute hehe
well done! :)
always love the lokane fics with a stalker loki
it's almost cute hehe
well done! :)
9/22/2012 c1 2Ainums
OMG! new reader:) I was reading the part that you put Harry Potter and Tom Riddle name and I was like, umm I remember being reading a Lokane fic why I'm reading Tom Riddle's name here? xD LOL so funny, but LokiTom Riddle its not good at all, well yes because both are so HANDSOME! xD
2AinumsOMG! new reader:) I was reading the part that you put Harry Potter and Tom Riddle name and I was like, umm I remember being reading a Lokane fic why I'm reading Tom Riddle's name here? xD LOL so funny, but LokiTom Riddle its not good at all, well yes because both are so HANDSOME! xD
7/5/2012 c2 23Amanda Saitou
It was great to have this epilogue, it fit perfectly with chapter one, and it was fun to see Jane realize that she'd already been in Loki's presence before... Hope you manage some time to write more Lokane!
23Amanda SaitouIt was great to have this epilogue, it fit perfectly with chapter one, and it was fun to see Jane realize that she'd already been in Loki's presence before... Hope you manage some time to write more Lokane!
6/29/2012 c1 PureSummerMagic
If this is your first time writing Loki/Jane I think you did pretty good job! And I hope to see a multi-chapter from you some time in the near future. I love how in the beginning Loki didn't see anything special about her.
"He had deduced that Jane was simply an average woman. She wasn't entirely a beauty, she wasn't tall, and she wasn't as shapely as Sif back in Asgard."
Then toward the ending his opinion shifted.
"She wasn't entirely a beauty, she wasn't tall, and she wasn't as shapely as Sif back in Asgard. But there was something about her that made her special, made her unique."
My favorite line in the story. :)
If this is your first time writing Loki/Jane I think you did pretty good job! And I hope to see a multi-chapter from you some time in the near future. I love how in the beginning Loki didn't see anything special about her.
"He had deduced that Jane was simply an average woman. She wasn't entirely a beauty, she wasn't tall, and she wasn't as shapely as Sif back in Asgard."
Then toward the ending his opinion shifted.
"She wasn't entirely a beauty, she wasn't tall, and she wasn't as shapely as Sif back in Asgard. But there was something about her that made her special, made her unique."
My favorite line in the story. :)
6/29/2012 c2 8ChildlikeEmpress
Yay! Short but sweet...I like that Jane recognized Loki on tv. Also, I really really hope you write that multi-chapter Lokane fic you keep tantalizingly mentioning.
8ChildlikeEmpressYay! Short but sweet...I like that Jane recognized Loki on tv. Also, I really really hope you write that multi-chapter Lokane fic you keep tantalizingly mentioning.
6/28/2012 c1 Guest
Haha, when I read "Tom Riddle" I thought, "Wasn't I just reading a fic about Loki?" I've a terrible memory. Anyway, great story! I don't think most Loki fans believe him to be totally evil. Poor baby.
Haha, when I read "Tom Riddle" I thought, "Wasn't I just reading a fic about Loki?" I've a terrible memory. Anyway, great story! I don't think most Loki fans believe him to be totally evil. Poor baby.
6/28/2012 c2 2Imperial Dragon
I loved this story and I can't wait to see your Lokane AU multi-chaptered fic.
2Imperial DragonI loved this story and I can't wait to see your Lokane AU multi-chaptered fic.
6/26/2012 c1 Ellory
Lol. Loki admiring Tom Riddle is just hysterical, but I can see why he would relate-given their family situations, etc.
Lol. Loki admiring Tom Riddle is just hysterical, but I can see why he would relate-given their family situations, etc.