for The Gift8/19/2013 c10 
1Milton Library Assistant
Oh, dear! It was just a dream... You had me on the edge for a while :)
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
1Milton Library AssistantOh, dear! It was just a dream... You had me on the edge for a while :)
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
8/10/2013 c10 16BoomShroom
Another interesting chapter! More insight on Peach, I see. That nightmare of hers was pretty disturbing, actually. I like how you took a different turn with it than I had anticipated. When Peach was about to open the door, I was expecting there to be tons of dead Toads and blood and stuff. But it was actually a normal scene. But with her drink being hinted at being blood and the slow build up with the horror, it was more unexpected and interesting. I definitely applaud you for that!
Oh boy, I think I have a feeling as to what Pech is going to do if Mario comes. I think she might tell him that she wants to stay with Bowser, so Mario won't get hurt by him...or worse, by her. Dammit, that kind of thing really tears out my heartstrings, throws them on the ground, and proceeds to mercilessly beat the crap outta them, you know?! But I suppose it would be necessary in the situation. I doubt Mario would leave for any other reason. Plus, it adds a LOT of emotional impact.
Anyways, nice chapter, and I hope to see more soon!
-booMshrooM
16BoomShroomAnother interesting chapter! More insight on Peach, I see. That nightmare of hers was pretty disturbing, actually. I like how you took a different turn with it than I had anticipated. When Peach was about to open the door, I was expecting there to be tons of dead Toads and blood and stuff. But it was actually a normal scene. But with her drink being hinted at being blood and the slow build up with the horror, it was more unexpected and interesting. I definitely applaud you for that!
Oh boy, I think I have a feeling as to what Pech is going to do if Mario comes. I think she might tell him that she wants to stay with Bowser, so Mario won't get hurt by him...or worse, by her. Dammit, that kind of thing really tears out my heartstrings, throws them on the ground, and proceeds to mercilessly beat the crap outta them, you know?! But I suppose it would be necessary in the situation. I doubt Mario would leave for any other reason. Plus, it adds a LOT of emotional impact.
Anyways, nice chapter, and I hope to see more soon!
-booMshrooM
8/7/2013 c10 17PrimeEmily135
Oh my goodness! I was so happy for this update! :) poor Peach, that's rough.
Yeah, I know the feeling of guilt after a hiatus, it sucks ;)
17PrimeEmily135Oh my goodness! I was so happy for this update! :) poor Peach, that's rough.
Yeah, I know the feeling of guilt after a hiatus, it sucks ;)
6/8/2013 c9 bearybeary
Tick tock tick tock. So long princess peach say hello to dark peach. I see that peach is on the brink into darkess, evil, insanity, and corruption.
Tick tock tick tock. So long princess peach say hello to dark peach. I see that peach is on the brink into darkess, evil, insanity, and corruption.
4/21/2013 c9 33Kaiimi
This chapter was definitely exciting! Peach trying to kill Daisy was so intense...and now Bowser has to deal with Dark Peach. And then we have Mario coming in to rescue her. Can this possibly get any more chaotic!?
33KaiimiThis chapter was definitely exciting! Peach trying to kill Daisy was so intense...and now Bowser has to deal with Dark Peach. And then we have Mario coming in to rescue her. Can this possibly get any more chaotic!?
4/20/2013 c8 Kaiimi
The end was pretty creepy. I have a feeling Bowser is going to play a much bigger role in the plot than him just capturing her...
The end was pretty creepy. I have a feeling Bowser is going to play a much bigger role in the plot than him just capturing her...
4/18/2013 c7 Kaiimi
I was for cheering for Luigi when he kicked Bowser's ass! I actually don't want Mario to die yet.
I was for cheering for Luigi when he kicked Bowser's ass! I actually don't want Mario to die yet.
4/18/2013 c6 Kaiimi
Great. Just when you thought things couldn't get more dramatic, Bowser comes in and threatens to finish off Mario. XD
Great. Just when you thought things couldn't get more dramatic, Bowser comes in and threatens to finish off Mario. XD
4/18/2013 c5 Kaiimi
Damn, the part where Peach was in pain kinda got to me. I can't help but wonder, is she infected with some kind of virus that makes her feel this way?
Damn, the part where Peach was in pain kinda got to me. I can't help but wonder, is she infected with some kind of virus that makes her feel this way?
4/18/2013 c4 Kaiimi
The gradual change of Peach is pretty damn fascinating. She's becoming her own woman, instead of staying hidden in her shell. Unfortunately, I'm pretty sure this will only lead to worse things...
The gradual change of Peach is pretty damn fascinating. She's becoming her own woman, instead of staying hidden in her shell. Unfortunately, I'm pretty sure this will only lead to worse things...
4/18/2013 c3 Kaiimi
Yep, Peach is DEFINITELY on the road to insanity/evilness/cruelty/whatever you can call it. This chapter was definitely exciting and suspenseful and I love how you put it in such neat details.
Yep, Peach is DEFINITELY on the road to insanity/evilness/cruelty/whatever you can call it. This chapter was definitely exciting and suspenseful and I love how you put it in such neat details.
4/18/2013 c2 Kaiimi
I like the way you're slowly building things up with Peach and this new problem of hers. I can only imagine how worse it's going to get later...
I like the way you're slowly building things up with Peach and this new problem of hers. I can only imagine how worse it's going to get later...
4/18/2013 c1 Kaiimi
OMG how did I NOT see this story earlier!? The intro was amazing! Such great detail and suspense...I love it! Favorited!
OMG how did I NOT see this story earlier!? The intro was amazing! Such great detail and suspense...I love it! Favorited!
4/13/2013 c9 17PrimeEmily135
Oh no, Daisy! :o
I like how animalistic Dak Peach is. She kind of reminds me of a wary cat in the dungeon. It was pretty cool.
I actually kind of felt bad for Bowser in this. Seeing Peach like that must be a real shock.
Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait for more :)
17PrimeEmily135Oh no, Daisy! :o
I like how animalistic Dak Peach is. She kind of reminds me of a wary cat in the dungeon. It was pretty cool.
I actually kind of felt bad for Bowser in this. Seeing Peach like that must be a real shock.
Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait for more :)