for An Almost Warriors story6/26/2012 c1 Lewis Paige
Imaginative and dramatic!
Imaginative and dramatic!
6/26/2012 c1 
3Veni0Vidi0Vici
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-Veni of LawlClan Critic Group
3Veni0Vidi0ViciThis story violates FFN rules and guidelines.
Please see number four and six under "Entries not allowed:";"Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc." and "Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries." respectively.
You may review the rules and guidelines at /guidelines
You agreed to follow these rules and guidelines before you submitted this fiction.
Your options are to delete the story or edit out the violations. For reference your violations are the chat/script format of part of the chapter and the fact that Chuck Norris (a real celebrity) is a character.
Thank you for your time,
-Veni of LawlClan Critic Group
6/24/2012 c1 Silver
Not to be rude, but... I don't get it. Why were kits hanging around a rouge? Don't mothers keep kits in camp? How did Daisystar know where Chuck was? Who's Chuck's mate, as it mentioned he had kits?
I suggest you try and add more detail. It was good, though!
Not to be rude, but... I don't get it. Why were kits hanging around a rouge? Don't mothers keep kits in camp? How did Daisystar know where Chuck was? Who's Chuck's mate, as it mentioned he had kits?
I suggest you try and add more detail. It was good, though!
6/23/2012 c1 Darkflame
I'm honestly VERY surprised you got an A on this...
I'm honestly VERY surprised you got an A on this...