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6/10/2016 c1 5Schattenspieler
Das ist sehr traurig. ._. aber eine nette Erklärung. Mir hat die Geschichte gut gefallen. (Once-ler sollte sich immer einen Teller bei Seite Stellen, wenn das öfter vorkommt. .')
11/9/2012 c1 ladykale1985
Poor Onec-ler,Love the story...
10/6/2012 c1 3crepes
God this was so depressing! Don't get me wrong! The way you executed the story and your writing style is excellent but man depressing! I really hate his family!
8/19/2012 c1 9Oncie's Sweetheart
D:
7/24/2012 c1 Guest
Oncie bby. Ow my feelings. :'(
6/25/2012 c1 24ectoaceinspace
This was really good! A title suggestion...? Hm... Maybe, Salt in the Wounds? )
6/25/2012 c1 55The Animanga Girl
So sad :'(
6/24/2012 c1 36Fanficaddicttion
Awww, poor oncie. He was burdened with the worst mother in existence. Why he feels like he has to please her is beyond me. Love your story though. very nice.
6/23/2012 c1 CrazyGirl1000
Aw my poor Oncie. His mom is a nasty person! Anyway, I really enjoyed this. It gave a little insight on Once-ler's need to please his mom.
6/23/2012 c1 CrazyGirl1000
Aw my poor Oncie. His mom is a nasty person! Anyway, I really enjoyed this. It gave a little insight on Once-ler's need to please his mom.

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