for Good Morning1/31/2016 c1 
77Reda
Awwww it's precious - I love all the detail and thoughts they have; it just really made it easy to remember what I liked about them in Bleach; it's been so long since I watched that series but wow this was nice ~ sweet morning sexy stuff it's so, so nice ~
77RedaAwwww it's precious - I love all the detail and thoughts they have; it just really made it easy to remember what I liked about them in Bleach; it's been so long since I watched that series but wow this was nice ~ sweet morning sexy stuff it's so, so nice ~
5/30/2015 c1 71great gospel
This was so sweet and simply gorgeous writing. I love how you captured this intimate moment between them, not just physically, but emotionally. It was so perfect, the way that they expressed their love and devotion to one another all without saying a single word. Well done.
71great gospelThis was so sweet and simply gorgeous writing. I love how you captured this intimate moment between them, not just physically, but emotionally. It was so perfect, the way that they expressed their love and devotion to one another all without saying a single word. Well done.
5/14/2015 c1 Qyara
So beautifully written I can't even find any words to describe this awesome fic. Your vocab is really superb too! And what I really love about your fic is the way you describe Ichigo & Rukia here. GOD, you really nailed them perfectly! I'm melting with every words, sentences, paragraphs you write here (especially Ichigo's kyaa XD). Thank you so much for sharing your talent for IchiRuki. Keep writing, nee! :)
So beautifully written I can't even find any words to describe this awesome fic. Your vocab is really superb too! And what I really love about your fic is the way you describe Ichigo & Rukia here. GOD, you really nailed them perfectly! I'm melting with every words, sentences, paragraphs you write here (especially Ichigo's kyaa XD). Thank you so much for sharing your talent for IchiRuki. Keep writing, nee! :)
4/15/2015 c1 yukikorinikurosaki
wow. just wow. despite being a lemon, your choice of words perfectly showed how two souls, that have that unique affinity, exhibited their physical bond by "making love." now, that, differentiates a simple act of plain sex {as in most M-rated fanfic} to the symbolic and beautifully crafted story of showing love between two equally beautiful characters, that is ichigo and rukia.
#IchirukiRules xD
wow. just wow. despite being a lemon, your choice of words perfectly showed how two souls, that have that unique affinity, exhibited their physical bond by "making love." now, that, differentiates a simple act of plain sex {as in most M-rated fanfic} to the symbolic and beautifully crafted story of showing love between two equally beautiful characters, that is ichigo and rukia.
#IchirukiRules xD
1/18/2015 c1 avatarfan82
This was excellent! I enjoyed the images and shifting points of view that gave us peeks into their minds during such an intimate moment.
The way you chose to narrate their love-making was very tastefully done and created images that felt authentic. There is just so much emotion and love being expressed here. Great job!
This was excellent! I enjoyed the images and shifting points of view that gave us peeks into their minds during such an intimate moment.
The way you chose to narrate their love-making was very tastefully done and created images that felt authentic. There is just so much emotion and love being expressed here. Great job!
8/28/2013 c1 shiniami
it was good ...not pointless lemon...it actually had a story line
you said a lot of things using a few words
well done
it was good ...not pointless lemon...it actually had a story line
you said a lot of things using a few words
well done
6/15/2013 c1 14oliviaotakusama101
I am simply mind blown right now... This is, by far, one of the most well written Ichiruki lemon pieces I have ever read. Its... refreshing. Most lemons simply resort to the physical interactions so quickly with little to no emotion woven in. While they are entertaining, to me, your fic has given me a completely different type of entertainment, this is amazing. I love lemons with sophisticated language and unspoken emotion, and this hits the spot.
A part I really liked in the story is when you quoted Shakespeare - "O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do. They pray; grant thou, lest faith turn to despair. Thus from my lips, by thine, my sin is purged" - from Romeo and Juliet, reminding us that this is Ichigo, lover of Shakespeare, and a human (or previously according to this story) and he fell in love with this petite Shinigami, Rukia. A love that many would sneer at, but it wouldn't matter to them, as long as they have each other.
What better moment to depict this love than the morning wake? When they are both in their most vulnerable form, opening up to each other and exchanging loving glances and sweet nothings. I really love this, through all your lovely descriptions and thorough back story of their deep feelings for each other, you managed to created butterflies within my stomach. Your writing is beautiful, mature, and might I dare say even that of a professional. There are more words I wish to express my love for this story with, but like Ichigo and Rukia, I'll have to express it unspokenly and press the Favorite Story button.
I'd me more than happy to read this amazing a million times over.
Never stop writing.
14oliviaotakusama101I am simply mind blown right now... This is, by far, one of the most well written Ichiruki lemon pieces I have ever read. Its... refreshing. Most lemons simply resort to the physical interactions so quickly with little to no emotion woven in. While they are entertaining, to me, your fic has given me a completely different type of entertainment, this is amazing. I love lemons with sophisticated language and unspoken emotion, and this hits the spot.
A part I really liked in the story is when you quoted Shakespeare - "O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do. They pray; grant thou, lest faith turn to despair. Thus from my lips, by thine, my sin is purged" - from Romeo and Juliet, reminding us that this is Ichigo, lover of Shakespeare, and a human (or previously according to this story) and he fell in love with this petite Shinigami, Rukia. A love that many would sneer at, but it wouldn't matter to them, as long as they have each other.
What better moment to depict this love than the morning wake? When they are both in their most vulnerable form, opening up to each other and exchanging loving glances and sweet nothings. I really love this, through all your lovely descriptions and thorough back story of their deep feelings for each other, you managed to created butterflies within my stomach. Your writing is beautiful, mature, and might I dare say even that of a professional. There are more words I wish to express my love for this story with, but like Ichigo and Rukia, I'll have to express it unspokenly and press the Favorite Story button.
I'd me more than happy to read this amazing a million times over.
Never stop writing.
11/5/2012 c1 3D-Rogue
Sweeeeet! I like that one very much, you have a good style. Maybe I'll be checking in on your other stories as well. )
3D-RogueSweeeeet! I like that one very much, you have a good style. Maybe I'll be checking in on your other stories as well. )
9/17/2012 c1 Guest
that was the sweetest ichigo&rukia one shot i have ever read.
that was the sweetest ichigo&rukia one shot i have ever read.
9/1/2012 c1 IchigoRukia fan
Wonderful! Loved it! Very well done!
Ichigo/Rukia forever!
Wonderful! Loved it! Very well done!
Ichigo/Rukia forever!