FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Protect and Serve: To Honor

2/13/2014 c1 OptimusPrimegirl213
book three geting good thanks
2/8/2014 c15 spriggan
Yay! great trilogy. I must say I like this ending better, though both are too sad for my tastes. Still I have to appreciate great writing.
1/24/2014 c15 blueskyangel11
I know it has been a long time since this series was published, but I only stumbled upon it a few days ago. I thought it best to review once I finished reading it all. Truth be told, I didn't have the courage to read the more realistic alternative ending because the original ending put me to tears.
Nonetheless, this series was so beautifully written that it brought so many emotions in my heart while I was reading it. From beginning to end, although it was in a fictional setting, it was just so realistic. From her arrival to her end, it didn't have the little things that made me think: "that's not possible."
It was truly a great pleasure to read, and I do hope you know that you are an amazing writer. (:
12/6/2013 c15 Eistla
I have no courage to read the other ending. Your writing brings forth such realistic world with characters whose fate feels so tangible I know the alternative ending would haunt me for too long time.

That said I would have liked you to write this ending with more thoroughly. Like is it now, it feels shallow, mere shadow compared to your writing otherwise.

Even then - your skill in writing is amazing and I feel great satisfaction to have been able to know Elayna and her story.
12/4/2013 c15 arabella
You scared me with that first epilogue, I was ready to starts throwing axes and removing heads, but with this I am content. I wish it could have been happier but it's better than the first epilogue that's for sure. Great story overall! I intend to be a movie director so I hope to tell stories as enrapturing as yours.
11/25/2013 c15 2rearviewxmirrors
I cried. Surprisingly more in this happier anding than I did in the other one. This trilogy was absolutely amazing! I am sad to see it go. I will however read the oneshot and review it. You are an amazing writer and I with you would please write more!
11/17/2013 c15 1Doctorwholover465
Personally I much prefer this epilogue XD sry about my last review, bit childish of me. It was great! I ADORE the story, but it was a cruel and unexpected plot twist, and a bit confusing at times, and that threw me off XD
11/17/2013 c12 Doctorwholover465
NO! No not fair!
11/15/2013 c1 Doctorwholover465
Nuuuuu! Don't tell me she gets sent away... :'( I guess seeing as it's complete I'll just have to keep reading. I've been hooked to this for while.
9/30/2013 c15 Synchronicity
I don't mean to attach this review to this one chapter but the end of the story seemed as good of a place as any.
I have read quite a few fics and Legolas was always my favorite character, but you brought all of these characters so much life and vibrance that I'm afraid I'll compare everything else I read to this story.
I've always thought that a good story has love, loss, hope, despair, and the understanding of what life is really about. This story has such a roller coaster of emotions packed in that I was cheering and crying when I usually stoically read a story and analyze and nitpick. This story captured my attention so much that I honestly can't remember one little grammatical error or flaw in logic. And there were any they certainly didn't bother me when I was reading.
I would like to offer my congratulations on a fantastically written story. I would say you should publish it and make millions, but alas it is fanfiction so that probably wouldn't work out so well.

Anyway, you have a fantastic gift for writing and a brilliant imagination to come up with this idea.
Congratulations again and best of luck in your future writing endeavors.
8/29/2013 c15 91TMI Fairy
This is the first Legomance I've read until the end. Usually I don't don't touch them or drop'm the moment a "certain prince" appears.
And I've read over a hundred fanfics here.
:)
Borys
7/3/2013 c14 3witchbaby300
I know you already finished this story but can you explain what happened? Did she really die? Is she still in Korea and she imagined the whole thing? I'm confused. What's the point of writing a horrible and sad ending? I read fanfiction to escape my shitty life not read about someone elses and be reminded of my own.
5/18/2013 c15 Guest
You made me cry. I hate that, but good for you! Loved the story but it still ended rather melancholy so I am looking forward to the one shots and YES a sequel, please! Something to see her heal a bit. Thanks.
summer
5/18/2013 c10 5The EarthSong
You have created an awesome character in Lane. She's real. She doesn't put up with crap, but she is kind and compassionate. Inspiring really. Thanks.
5/18/2013 c8 The EarthSong
!
225 « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 7 14 .. Last Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service