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2/4/2018 c3 manilla34556
This is awesome. PLEASE FINISH IT!
1/2/2013 c4 Niightowl
Wow the story is really coming together. Just a few mistakes . The Japanese don't celebrate Christmas in any anime whatsoever so your reference was off "feels like Christmas"...

And another thing why not get a beta reader? You made a lot of grammatical errors and spelling like:

Hitenzo go to fum in another room. And the others stretched. The Jonin placed a hand on her shoulder, "I'll you all the things we discussed in the morning but right now you must rest, you need your strength." She nodded and she too stood.

You probably meant: "Hitenzo went to fume in the other room. And "I'll TELL you all the things we need to discuss in the morning, BUT right now you must rest. You need your strength.
12/28/2012 c3 Niightowl
Fast paced and excellent! Sasuke and every one is in character too update!
12/28/2012 c2 Niightowl
Great filler story!
12/28/2012 c1 Niightowl
Great start! Me myself am writing a team 7 fic
7/18/2012 c4 Yoyou
you lost me a bit on this one because i don't know if you noticed but when you switched characters it kind of got confusing...
7/18/2012 c3 yoyou
dang this is one long chappie! but good job
7/18/2012 c2 yoyou
i like but i think you lost the characters a bit...
7/2/2012 c3 Guest
nice ending, i personally like the length. continue.
7/2/2012 c2 Guest
i know who this is...is it Itachi? i just found out about this website a week ago so, i was wondering...how do you upload stuff? anyway its pretty good but the mood just went from friendly to serious with the first two chapters, confusing...

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