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7/2/2012 c2 1oldman543
Cool. Lots of potential. Keep writing.
7/2/2012 c4 Guest
Brilliant! Please update soon! - Merula Aeolus (fan fiction author)
7/2/2012 c4 Ellory
This story is very unique, which is rare in the time travel genre. I find myself enjoying it more than I expected to. Well done.
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
Great story! Keep up the good work.
7/2/2012 c4 1OverLordRevan
Love the chapter ... I was thinking back to the forth kaze why couldn't you show him gara defence is from his mom and not the demon through sealing.
7/2/2012 c4 Guest
looks interesting so far
7/1/2012 c1 Sorrowful Stone
Loved the idea of a stealth!Naruto. Reminds me of Kyubed: Shinobi's Revenge on Naruto. Good story, but hasn't been finished.
7/1/2012 c4 Lycan01
Great chapter hope to see more soon
7/1/2012 c3 Lycan01
Good chapter I liked the seal you made.
7/1/2012 c2 Lycan01
Good chapter
7/1/2012 c1 Lycan01
Nice start
7/1/2012 c1 5exillion
oh god you killed naruto! Naruto wearing black? Are you insane? That's like saying Kakashi stopped reading porn! Besides which, ninjas DON'T need to change clothes to fit the surrounding environment because they can just henge themselves to look like anything they want, that includes clothes or items. ugh! Naruto wearing dark colors. Oh by tits grace, save me from that horrible image!

and Naruto a chunin? When did that happen? I always got the feeling naruto is just going to say genin until the end of the war and then become hokage. Seriously, I doubt he NEEDS to be chunin, they'd just place him in the hokake position because he's the most dangerous bastard in the world. So dangerous he's able to compete with Madara equally one on one if he had the chance.
7/1/2012 c4 Lazyman12
Oh my god! This was genius
7/1/2012 c1 Guest
why's naruto bothering with team 7 at all? he should've tried for some other team. his acting skills sucks too.
7/1/2012 c4 War O' The Willow
He wrote to the Kazekage? To stop Orochimaru's... incident with him? I am really liking where this is going! I don't imagine Naruto's gonna be 100% safe with the Kazekage - especially considering he's Konoha's Jinchuriki... I smell misdirection and disguises!

Cheers for writing this mate!
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