for The disappearance of Eyeshield 217/16/2013 c2 IMACHI IS MADDDD
Y U NO CONTINUE THIS RIDICULOUSLY GREAT STORY?
Y U NO CONTINUE THIS RIDICULOUSLY GREAT STORY?
7/1/2013 c4 Guest
Dissapearance of eyeshield 21 please!
Dissapearance of eyeshield 21 please!
7/1/2013 c2 Mia
I love this soooooooooooooooooooooo much! x infinity
Please update this! It's so rare to have such a awesome original story line! The suspense is killing me!
I love this soooooooooooooooooooooo much! x infinity
Please update this! It's so rare to have such a awesome original story line! The suspense is killing me!
7/1/2013 c4 Guest
Please update this story! I love it to bits! It's is an awesome story!
Please update this story! I love it to bits! It's is an awesome story!
6/2/2013 c1 Sachiel Angelo
Does this have any relation with Katekyo Hitman Reborn? Or are you just using the names. As for that one Japanese word "Aa", it doesn't really mean anything. Its not really Japanese per se. If you are looking for just 'yes' the simplest term would be "hai".
Does this have any relation with Katekyo Hitman Reborn? Or are you just using the names. As for that one Japanese word "Aa", it doesn't really mean anything. Its not really Japanese per se. If you are looking for just 'yes' the simplest term would be "hai".
3/22/2013 c4 
5Echo Andalice
interesting story .. btw i just want to ask.. are by any change you use khr as reference? ;D
5Echo Andaliceinteresting story .. btw i just want to ask.. are by any change you use khr as reference? ;D
1/27/2013 c2 Glace
Your translation for 'Aa' is right. There are many translations for "yes" after all.
Love the rewritten! You've gotten MUCH BETTER! no kidding.
Please update soon! To think Sena might have a shrouded past or something (o.o)
Your translation for 'Aa' is right. There are many translations for "yes" after all.
Love the rewritten! You've gotten MUCH BETTER! no kidding.
Please update soon! To think Sena might have a shrouded past or something (o.o)
1/27/2013 c2 9ShinigamiinPeru
I'm starting to wonder how Deimon will copr through their loss... update soon! :)
9ShinigamiinPeruI'm starting to wonder how Deimon will copr through their loss... update soon! :)
1/27/2013 c1 Guest
When r u planning to rewrite this? The story is great; i believe that if the problems are solved, others would come to read it.
After all, there's not much eyeshield fanfics with sena being the bad guy!
When r u planning to rewrite this? The story is great; i believe that if the problems are solved, others would come to read it.
After all, there's not much eyeshield fanfics with sena being the bad guy!
11/26/2012 c2 1Crystal.Azure
I don't really understand, ah, I mean, I don't understand the plot, words and personal pronoun.
I think you need a beta reader
1Crystal.AzureI don't really understand, ah, I mean, I don't understand the plot, words and personal pronoun.
I think you need a beta reader
11/12/2012 c1 poisinrose
THis is so uber dramatic! It really makes people curious ya know with all the suspence and foreboding and everything... I heartily approve! :-D please update quickly
THis is so uber dramatic! It really makes people curious ya know with all the suspence and foreboding and everything... I heartily approve! :-D please update quickly