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64/29/2016 c1 sasunaru13
oh mannn i love this one shot very much! kinda hoping there's more continuation~
oh mannn i love this one shot very much! kinda hoping there's more continuation~
7/4/2015 c1 guardianofdragonlore
I wish Isis would have screamed it...the reactions would have been awesome.
I wish Isis would have screamed it...the reactions would have been awesome.
7/21/2012 c1 reported content
Oh you silly boys, you
;)
Cute one-shot, hun. I liked it, and now I want to look up belly-dancing if only to see if I can do it. :D
Oh you silly boys, you
;)
Cute one-shot, hun. I liked it, and now I want to look up belly-dancing if only to see if I can do it. :D
7/18/2012 c1 secretsoul7
:D awesome cute super special fanfic I loved it! thank you for writting such a wonderful fic
:D awesome cute super special fanfic I loved it! thank you for writting such a wonderful fic
7/10/2012 c1 bellydancer
*wolf whistles,while nosebleeding*
*wolf whistles,while nosebleeding*
7/5/2012 c1 starrenPI
That was fun to read. It's so sexy to think of Alfred as a belly dancer. *blushes* Nice job.
In your next story (since you ARE going to be writing more sexy stuff) could you please try to separate the text a bit by having more paragraphs. It was a bit hard to read with everything pushed together.
That was fun to read. It's so sexy to think of Alfred as a belly dancer. *blushes* Nice job.
In your next story (since you ARE going to be writing more sexy stuff) could you please try to separate the text a bit by having more paragraphs. It was a bit hard to read with everything pushed together.
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
Usually I hate it when the story and dialogue are all chunk together...but for some reason, I tolerated with this story :). I liked it, your a good Author, although there are some things you can improve on, your still good. But...I suggest not to mush everything together My eyes can't handle that. That's just me though, I love Rus/Ame, looking forward more from you!
Usually I hate it when the story and dialogue are all chunk together...but for some reason, I tolerated with this story :). I liked it, your a good Author, although there are some things you can improve on, your still good. But...I suggest not to mush everything together My eyes can't handle that. That's just me though, I love Rus/Ame, looking forward more from you!
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
Awwwwwwwwwwww i wanted to see the smut XD
Awwwwwwwwwwww i wanted to see the smut XD