for A Rainbow in the Dark10/14/2024 c1 nightpurr1
I have enjoyed reading your story.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the entertainment.
I have enjoyed reading your story.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the entertainment.
10/10/2024 c29 Guest
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10/7/2024 c31 Guest
Gags. Why would anyone marry snape? He’s so ugly
Gags. Why would anyone marry snape? He’s so ugly
10/3/2024 c31 Hughes Ogure
I was looking forward a nice Severus adopts Harry fanfiction and I got stuck with a bad nonsensical story instead. Its not worth reading and I do not understand how you got so many positive reviews/comments.
I guess I got spoiled by the other great fics (with similar premises) that I read before. It feels like this was written by a child who does not understand the characters, nor the brilliant saga J.K Rowling wrote...
Both your characters and your story have no substance or deapth whatsoever. James Potter died for his son too and you treat his character like trash. There's no way in hell Sirius and Remus would leave Harry at Petunias either. I know this is a fanfiction, but you distorted the characters personalities so much that they all become unbelievable. They make no sense at all. The bashing is also way out there.
You need to seriously go back to the drawing board and fix your story because the premise is really interesting! The execution of said premise needs a lot of work though... I hope you rewrite this story, fix your many plot holes and make it make sense somehow.
I was looking forward a nice Severus adopts Harry fanfiction and I got stuck with a bad nonsensical story instead. Its not worth reading and I do not understand how you got so many positive reviews/comments.
I guess I got spoiled by the other great fics (with similar premises) that I read before. It feels like this was written by a child who does not understand the characters, nor the brilliant saga J.K Rowling wrote...
Both your characters and your story have no substance or deapth whatsoever. James Potter died for his son too and you treat his character like trash. There's no way in hell Sirius and Remus would leave Harry at Petunias either. I know this is a fanfiction, but you distorted the characters personalities so much that they all become unbelievable. They make no sense at all. The bashing is also way out there.
You need to seriously go back to the drawing board and fix your story because the premise is really interesting! The execution of said premise needs a lot of work though... I hope you rewrite this story, fix your many plot holes and make it make sense somehow.
9/18/2024 c31 rowenasheir
Amber will need to put James in his place or have a parent he is too scared of to cross!
Amber will need to put James in his place or have a parent he is too scared of to cross!
9/9/2024 c17 retired10
I love the little details you add in that make it seem more real! Like some of the teacher going with the students to the train...to make sure all the students were safely aboard! Love the story!
I love the little details you add in that make it seem more real! Like some of the teacher going with the students to the train...to make sure all the students were safely aboard! Love the story!
9/9/2024 c11 retired10
Awwww... Was the mean old man disappointed that all his plans went down the loo?
Awwww... Was the mean old man disappointed that all his plans went down the loo?