for With the Tide3/19/2014 c14 Guest
This twist is making me very frustrated! Ahhhhhh they just want to be happy!:( poor Kurama. He's going to let her forget to keep her safe or track the guy down. I'm so mad and sad.
This twist is making me very frustrated! Ahhhhhh they just want to be happy!:( poor Kurama. He's going to let her forget to keep her safe or track the guy down. I'm so mad and sad.
3/8/2014 c35 
95Miqila
Ah damn, where should I start? Well first of all, I still prefer JinXReina (sorry, but I just can't get over it :p) I loved the scene between Reina and Hiei and I really hope we can see the shorty again in the epilogue; I love his and Reina's lovehate relationship... not the romantic kind, their relationship is more like yeah-you're-my-friend-and-I-really-care-about-you-in-my-own-way-but-I'd-rather-die-than-let-you-know kind of thing (like Hiei and Kuwabara.) Either that or I'm simply seeing things. And I hoped she would've met Mukuro, but oh well... if there's a seguel to this then maybe in that? And I wouldn't mind seeing Yomi again either. Hmm, I was wishing to see something between Kuronue and Maya, but apparently not. I'd still like to see a scene between the team of four again (Kuronue, Maya, Yana and Reina.); they make such a good team. And for some reason I'd like to see Hikari, Haru and the chief (was he even named at any point?) in the epiloque. Oh, and I almost forgot: Reina having a special power like that that no one else had did seem a bit Mary Sueish, but since I found no other signs about that I let it slide and besides, it seems the story wouldn't have worked the way you wanted it to without it.
And now, about your possible next story: I'd prefer it to be the JinXOC version with Reina as a side character. So if you do that then PLEASE make Jin's girl a human. Somehow I like the demonXhuman things much more that demonXdemon ones. And it'd be nice if she was a bit more cowardly and shy than Reina (sadist? Me? Well maybe a little...), as in her creaping out because she sees a demon. Just a succestion tough; it's your story.
P.S: Kuronue needs a woman. Is Shizuru still single?
95MiqilaAh damn, where should I start? Well first of all, I still prefer JinXReina (sorry, but I just can't get over it :p) I loved the scene between Reina and Hiei and I really hope we can see the shorty again in the epilogue; I love his and Reina's lovehate relationship... not the romantic kind, their relationship is more like yeah-you're-my-friend-and-I-really-care-about-you-in-my-own-way-but-I'd-rather-die-than-let-you-know kind of thing (like Hiei and Kuwabara.) Either that or I'm simply seeing things. And I hoped she would've met Mukuro, but oh well... if there's a seguel to this then maybe in that? And I wouldn't mind seeing Yomi again either. Hmm, I was wishing to see something between Kuronue and Maya, but apparently not. I'd still like to see a scene between the team of four again (Kuronue, Maya, Yana and Reina.); they make such a good team. And for some reason I'd like to see Hikari, Haru and the chief (was he even named at any point?) in the epiloque. Oh, and I almost forgot: Reina having a special power like that that no one else had did seem a bit Mary Sueish, but since I found no other signs about that I let it slide and besides, it seems the story wouldn't have worked the way you wanted it to without it.
And now, about your possible next story: I'd prefer it to be the JinXOC version with Reina as a side character. So if you do that then PLEASE make Jin's girl a human. Somehow I like the demonXhuman things much more that demonXdemon ones. And it'd be nice if she was a bit more cowardly and shy than Reina (sadist? Me? Well maybe a little...), as in her creaping out because she sees a demon. Just a succestion tough; it's your story.
P.S: Kuronue needs a woman. Is Shizuru still single?
3/7/2014 c35 Kactuskat16
Another fantastic chapter! Reina really needs to exist in the series. I loved everything about this chapter, you did a great job describing the action going on. And the ending... Heh! You go, girl!
It's hard to believe that this story is almost over. We're so close! Ugh. Hey! At least we can all go through and reread the story! I can't wait for the Epilogue!
I also can't wait for Gravity! Like, I'm really looking forward to some Jin love!
Thanks for being such an awesome and dedicated author!
Another fantastic chapter! Reina really needs to exist in the series. I loved everything about this chapter, you did a great job describing the action going on. And the ending... Heh! You go, girl!
It's hard to believe that this story is almost over. We're so close! Ugh. Hey! At least we can all go through and reread the story! I can't wait for the Epilogue!
I also can't wait for Gravity! Like, I'm really looking forward to some Jin love!
Thanks for being such an awesome and dedicated author!
3/6/2014 c35 Zinthree
It was definitely different seeing a different side to the calculating/so sure of himself Kurama. But you pulled it off very nicely. I also have to say that a mischievous Yukina is amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.(Or your next story!)
It was definitely different seeing a different side to the calculating/so sure of himself Kurama. But you pulled it off very nicely. I also have to say that a mischievous Yukina is amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.(Or your next story!)
3/6/2014 c35 Emzybubble
I am legitimately devastated that this is all ending.. how can you do this to me!
I am legitimately devastated that this is all ending.. how can you do this to me!
3/6/2014 c35 unknown player
Can't believe this is ending soon oh good Lorde
And shucks what you did with the changing POVs - from Kurama to Reina and back, that was just genius!
Plus it didn't feel OOC for Kurama at all. I also love how you put just enough of Kuronue to ease the tension a bit. And your characterization of Yukina - unique, but very probable, too :D The bit with Shizuru was delicious as well.
Yeahp, totally had a great time reading this chapter. I'm just sad that this is ending :( :( I think I told you before, but good KuramaOC fics really are hard to find :( Are you going to write any other OC fics soon?
Can't believe this is ending soon oh good Lorde
And shucks what you did with the changing POVs - from Kurama to Reina and back, that was just genius!
Plus it didn't feel OOC for Kurama at all. I also love how you put just enough of Kuronue to ease the tension a bit. And your characterization of Yukina - unique, but very probable, too :D The bit with Shizuru was delicious as well.
Yeahp, totally had a great time reading this chapter. I'm just sad that this is ending :( :( I think I told you before, but good KuramaOC fics really are hard to find :( Are you going to write any other OC fics soon?
3/5/2014 c35 20Beryl Bloodstone
Aw, I wish I could chat with you in person, too. Another splendid chapter, but you did have one mistake. It's in the first part of Kurama's POV, where it says,
"Shigure retorted, braci himself..."
I know what you meant, though. Just trying to help! Anyway, I'm going to miss anticipating new chapters from this. At least, you're working on Gravity, which was another one of my favorites.
20Beryl BloodstoneAw, I wish I could chat with you in person, too. Another splendid chapter, but you did have one mistake. It's in the first part of Kurama's POV, where it says,
"Shigure retorted, braci himself..."
I know what you meant, though. Just trying to help! Anyway, I'm going to miss anticipating new chapters from this. At least, you're working on Gravity, which was another one of my favorites.
3/5/2014 c35 11LazyHaru
OHMYGOD! I cant beleive they did IT! Yes! eek! omg! i love it! Oh my god! Yukina and kuwabara! freakin Lolz! i wonder what she said at the end? wow! Yes! just Yes! i cant wait for the next chapter but i also don't want to because its the last chapter! oh well, hope u update soon!
11LazyHaruOHMYGOD! I cant beleive they did IT! Yes! eek! omg! i love it! Oh my god! Yukina and kuwabara! freakin Lolz! i wonder what she said at the end? wow! Yes! just Yes! i cant wait for the next chapter but i also don't want to because its the last chapter! oh well, hope u update soon!
3/5/2014 c35 Draconic-Mermaid
Wow, just wow. This chapter is really good!
I liked how we got see the differences in Reina's physical abilities after she got kidnapped.
I also liked how via the mate mark that she could see through Kurama's eyes and help him!
The ending to this chapter was super cute too!
I like mischievous Yukina, I always end giggling whenever you write her.
Ack! I can't wait to read the epilogue! (Ah, I got the song from Repo! stuck in my head now.)
ATG and WTT have been one hell of a ride, one that I would love to ride over and over again!
I'm excited for when Gravity comes out so I can read that too!
Wow, just wow. This chapter is really good!
I liked how we got see the differences in Reina's physical abilities after she got kidnapped.
I also liked how via the mate mark that she could see through Kurama's eyes and help him!
The ending to this chapter was super cute too!
I like mischievous Yukina, I always end giggling whenever you write her.
Ack! I can't wait to read the epilogue! (Ah, I got the song from Repo! stuck in my head now.)
ATG and WTT have been one hell of a ride, one that I would love to ride over and over again!
I'm excited for when Gravity comes out so I can read that too!
3/5/2014 c35 1Author.Mitsuki
You, lady, have done it yet again. This chapter was wonderful - positively dripped with emotion and mental workings. I enjoyed it so much, but can't help but feel sad that Reina & Kurama's little duology will be coming to an end. But I understand one can't very well write about characters forever, lol, there must be a natural end. :)
I love the way you tell a story. The characters flow so well and feel truly alive in many ways...it always makes me kind of sad to reach the end of a chapter because I want to share the characters' world and lives a bit longer, you know?
But anyway, great job! I can't wait to read more of your delightful writing - only the next (and last) chapter of WTT, but also any other story you put your mind to write. :
1Author.MitsukiYou, lady, have done it yet again. This chapter was wonderful - positively dripped with emotion and mental workings. I enjoyed it so much, but can't help but feel sad that Reina & Kurama's little duology will be coming to an end. But I understand one can't very well write about characters forever, lol, there must be a natural end. :)
I love the way you tell a story. The characters flow so well and feel truly alive in many ways...it always makes me kind of sad to reach the end of a chapter because I want to share the characters' world and lives a bit longer, you know?
But anyway, great job! I can't wait to read more of your delightful writing - only the next (and last) chapter of WTT, but also any other story you put your mind to write. :
3/5/2014 c35 Guest
I love this story. I can't believe there's only one chapter left!
I love this story. I can't believe there's only one chapter left!
3/5/2014 c35 5YuYuHakushoObsesser
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! *still geeking* Love love love love love love love love love love! Sad that there's only going to be one more chapter tho :( I'll be looking forward to the next one though! I wish I could sit and have coffee and chat with you :( Wish we could find a way to visit each other and do that :) I know for a fact we'd talk about writing and YYH XD lol
5YuYuHakushoObsesserAwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! *still geeking* Love love love love love love love love love love! Sad that there's only going to be one more chapter tho :( I'll be looking forward to the next one though! I wish I could sit and have coffee and chat with you :( Wish we could find a way to visit each other and do that :) I know for a fact we'd talk about writing and YYH XD lol
2/23/2014 c34 YuYuHakushoObsesser
Gah! so many emotions! I was on a roller coaster again XD especially realizing that it's going to be done soon :'( AGT and WTT are my utmost fav stories on here! I'm sad to see this one ending soon but I am looking forward to your next one as I'm sure it'll be amazing! Can't wait for the next update!
Gah! so many emotions! I was on a roller coaster again XD especially realizing that it's going to be done soon :'( AGT and WTT are my utmost fav stories on here! I'm sad to see this one ending soon but I am looking forward to your next one as I'm sure it'll be amazing! Can't wait for the next update!