for With the Tide12/2/2013 c31 RandomCitizen
Well...that marking thing came back with a vengeance. 0-0
Now I'm imagineing how gangster pissed Yusuke might be...Like him Yelling what the hell?! and demanding Youko come out so he can kick his ass. Or at least somebody. 'XP
Sheesh...I have a feeling Yomi won't be as generous of a host this time around to make matters worse...
Well...that marking thing came back with a vengeance. 0-0
Now I'm imagineing how gangster pissed Yusuke might be...Like him Yelling what the hell?! and demanding Youko come out so he can kick his ass. Or at least somebody. 'XP
Sheesh...I have a feeling Yomi won't be as generous of a host this time around to make matters worse...
11/28/2013 c30 Beryl Bloodstone
Hello again! Sorry I haven't been reviewing! My stupid email's been taking emails from Fanfiction and sticking them into the spam folder. I've been wondering why I haven't heard from you in a while.
Anywho, what a chapter! I kinda smiled like a goof cuz Reina used the same intimidation tactic I've would've used in her place. Like, really? This is Makai and you're gonna lust after the same thing humans lust after? Puh-lezze! Ah, man! Nice work!
Hello again! Sorry I haven't been reviewing! My stupid email's been taking emails from Fanfiction and sticking them into the spam folder. I've been wondering why I haven't heard from you in a while.
Anywho, what a chapter! I kinda smiled like a goof cuz Reina used the same intimidation tactic I've would've used in her place. Like, really? This is Makai and you're gonna lust after the same thing humans lust after? Puh-lezze! Ah, man! Nice work!
11/28/2013 c29 Beryl Bloodstone
My favorite in this series was meeting Jin's family. In the first, all the interactions with Karasu, as creepy as they were. And Kuronue! Can't get enough of that gorgeous ghost.
My favorite in this series was meeting Jin's family. In the first, all the interactions with Karasu, as creepy as they were. And Kuronue! Can't get enough of that gorgeous ghost.
11/28/2013 c31 Draconic-Mermaid
I thought you said this was going to be a fluffy chapter. I..Just..what? ;;m;;
I was prepared to sing wild thing but now I just wanna go nope.
Talk about a emotional roller coaster ride.
Shit, I'm still reeling from this chapter.
I must congratulate you... again, first for scaring the shit out of me with Youko and the second for all the reviews you've gotten! Good Job!
I am excited for the next chapter!
Ehehe I just hope everything goes well for Reina and Kurama weh QwQ
I thought you said this was going to be a fluffy chapter. I..Just..what? ;;m;;
I was prepared to sing wild thing but now I just wanna go nope.
Talk about a emotional roller coaster ride.
Shit, I'm still reeling from this chapter.
I must congratulate you... again, first for scaring the shit out of me with Youko and the second for all the reviews you've gotten! Good Job!
I am excited for the next chapter!
Ehehe I just hope everything goes well for Reina and Kurama weh QwQ
11/28/2013 c31 s3rendipitousrhyme
Woah...waking up to this chapter just completely solidified the greatness of my Thanksgiving day. When I imagined in my mind what it was that Youko was going to try to do to her I was just thinking along the lines of physically harming her..NOT what actually happened/almost happened. Well, truthfully the thought that he was going to do something OTHER than just injure her crossed my mind at first but I didn't seem to believe it. That's the reason why you scared me when I read that warning at the beginning of the chapter. lol I realized my first thought had been correct all along.
I simply adore the amount of emotion palpable throughout Reina's thoughts and your description of things period, especially the amount of it able to be felt when Reina is going through her memories of the past and her love and resolve for Kurama. It's gorgeous.
I had an unbelievably good time going through this chapter and staying on the edge of my seat with the suspense, but now I'm oh so eager to learn what will happen during this confrontation with Yomi and Yusuke.
I feel bad for wanting this since you've just made an update, but I REALLY REALLY hope we receive the next chapter soon enough, because the suspense of waiting to see what will occur in this next, obviously tense situation the cliffhanger introduced will kill me. .
Woah...waking up to this chapter just completely solidified the greatness of my Thanksgiving day. When I imagined in my mind what it was that Youko was going to try to do to her I was just thinking along the lines of physically harming her..NOT what actually happened/almost happened. Well, truthfully the thought that he was going to do something OTHER than just injure her crossed my mind at first but I didn't seem to believe it. That's the reason why you scared me when I read that warning at the beginning of the chapter. lol I realized my first thought had been correct all along.
I simply adore the amount of emotion palpable throughout Reina's thoughts and your description of things period, especially the amount of it able to be felt when Reina is going through her memories of the past and her love and resolve for Kurama. It's gorgeous.
I had an unbelievably good time going through this chapter and staying on the edge of my seat with the suspense, but now I'm oh so eager to learn what will happen during this confrontation with Yomi and Yusuke.
I feel bad for wanting this since you've just made an update, but I REALLY REALLY hope we receive the next chapter soon enough, because the suspense of waiting to see what will occur in this next, obviously tense situation the cliffhanger introduced will kill me. .
11/28/2013 c31 KactusKat16
Wow, love, love, LOVED IT!
The subject matter doesn't bother me at all. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Seriously, this is one of the best fanfictions (including ATG) I've never read! Thank you for putting so much effort and thought into this wonderful series! I'll miss this when it's over, but I will always look forward to more of your work. (Possibly a Jin/OC centric fanfic?)
I love getting an evolved look into Reina and Kurama's relationship. How will these recent events with Youko affect their relationship? Can't wait to find out how you wrap all of this up!
Happy Thanksgiving!
Wow, love, love, LOVED IT!
The subject matter doesn't bother me at all. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Seriously, this is one of the best fanfictions (including ATG) I've never read! Thank you for putting so much effort and thought into this wonderful series! I'll miss this when it's over, but I will always look forward to more of your work. (Possibly a Jin/OC centric fanfic?)
I love getting an evolved look into Reina and Kurama's relationship. How will these recent events with Youko affect their relationship? Can't wait to find out how you wrap all of this up!
Happy Thanksgiving!
11/28/2013 c31 verry-chan
seeing that you updated made my day that much better! geez, even with that warning at the beginning I was shocked as hell. when I asked for more Youko and Reina interation I didn't really have this in mind. Far feom it...but I like! Youko...my little fox did that!? What I have a question is why he lost control? was he not aware that he if he marked her he would kill her? Was it b/c Kurama was turned off that animal instinct just took over sort of say?
What this reminded me of was how I mentioned that it was sad how Kurama could never mark her as his mate since it will kill her. But dang. I was shocked but npt shocked ya know? I liked how well it was writen. I felt Youko's desired running through his veins and her poor heart as she was scared shitless due to Youko's thoughts and actions.
Way to end it in that cliffhanger! ! I love and hate you so much right now haha. Ah, they are so darn close! I'm curious abouy Yusake. He's human with demon blood...will that bother Reina? You gatta update soon! grear job!
seeing that you updated made my day that much better! geez, even with that warning at the beginning I was shocked as hell. when I asked for more Youko and Reina interation I didn't really have this in mind. Far feom it...but I like! Youko...my little fox did that!? What I have a question is why he lost control? was he not aware that he if he marked her he would kill her? Was it b/c Kurama was turned off that animal instinct just took over sort of say?
What this reminded me of was how I mentioned that it was sad how Kurama could never mark her as his mate since it will kill her. But dang. I was shocked but npt shocked ya know? I liked how well it was writen. I felt Youko's desired running through his veins and her poor heart as she was scared shitless due to Youko's thoughts and actions.
Way to end it in that cliffhanger! ! I love and hate you so much right now haha. Ah, they are so darn close! I'm curious abouy Yusake. He's human with demon blood...will that bother Reina? You gatta update soon! grear job!
11/28/2013 c31 unknown player
Well... SHIT.
yeah wait lemme process everything but now all I can think in my head is "shit".
...
Okay.
Good Lord what the phuck just happened, woman?! Damn it Youko. Damn damn damn. Definitely wasn't expecting that. Idk, it's like I got hit by an incoming train. O_O
WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?! How could you do this to us?! Your loyal readers?!
Damn it Kurama sad sad person ((
Though to be honest I got confused at some parts. More because I can't remember some of the scenes. Damn have to read the two series again once my semester ends.
But seriously, this chapter HURTS. You have one hell of a writing skill to make me hurt this much. Gahh
Kay fine, beautifully written, but doesn't make it any less painful. -_-
Looking forward to the next.
P.S. When are things getting better? T_T I miss the old Kurama and Reina.
Well... SHIT.
yeah wait lemme process everything but now all I can think in my head is "shit".
...
Okay.
Good Lord what the phuck just happened, woman?! Damn it Youko. Damn damn damn. Definitely wasn't expecting that. Idk, it's like I got hit by an incoming train. O_O
WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?! How could you do this to us?! Your loyal readers?!
Damn it Kurama sad sad person ((
Though to be honest I got confused at some parts. More because I can't remember some of the scenes. Damn have to read the two series again once my semester ends.
But seriously, this chapter HURTS. You have one hell of a writing skill to make me hurt this much. Gahh
Kay fine, beautifully written, but doesn't make it any less painful. -_-
Looking forward to the next.
P.S. When are things getting better? T_T I miss the old Kurama and Reina.
11/27/2013 c31 
1Otaku-neku
Oh.
Oh...
Oh...
OH...!
OOOOHHHHH!
OAO Wah!
Hope I didn't jinx you Reina! I was just kidding before!(Well not really) You were mistaken Reina; Youko doesn't think of you as a toy and does care for you which is a plus though so naturally he wants you as a mate... which involves mating and marking.
Though really now was not the time for this Youko (get your priorities straight) and even if demons are different about it mating must be consenting for us humans! Respect that even in or especially in the heat of passion!(Albeit one-sided passion at the time...) I wonder how they will get around this marking thing later on when everything's said and done since she does reject demons...
Only a few chapters yet you say author? Will we see a bit of Kurama/Youko point of view for what happened or no? Any who if you keep making chapters like these keep the chapters coming and not leave us with cliffhangers!
Frankly I did feel that reply/pm you gave me sounded foreboding... hmph. By the way I enjoyed (in a non sadistic kind of way Reina) this chapter!
1Otaku-nekuOh.
Oh...
Oh...
OH...!
OOOOHHHHH!
OAO Wah!
Hope I didn't jinx you Reina! I was just kidding before!(Well not really) You were mistaken Reina; Youko doesn't think of you as a toy and does care for you which is a plus though so naturally he wants you as a mate... which involves mating and marking.
Though really now was not the time for this Youko (get your priorities straight) and even if demons are different about it mating must be consenting for us humans! Respect that even in or especially in the heat of passion!(Albeit one-sided passion at the time...) I wonder how they will get around this marking thing later on when everything's said and done since she does reject demons...
Only a few chapters yet you say author? Will we see a bit of Kurama/Youko point of view for what happened or no? Any who if you keep making chapters like these keep the chapters coming and not leave us with cliffhangers!
Frankly I did feel that reply/pm you gave me sounded foreboding... hmph. By the way I enjoyed (in a non sadistic kind of way Reina) this chapter!
11/27/2013 c31 A Deathless Song
Holy shit. This chapter...wow. The whole scene with Youko was intense, and Kurama and Reina just got shoved through the ringer again, didn't they? But I'm really glad she finally remembered him and how much she loved him, and what she'd sacrificed and endured for the sake of that love.
And I can barely believe that this story is drawing towards its close. I remember reading the original version and panicking when it got taken down from the sight, and then cheering when you put it back up. I'm emotionally invested in your story - I've really come to love it, since I've been following it for years. It will be sad to see it end, but at the same time, I'm just so excited for it, you know?
Great chapter. Really, just an emotionally evocative experience. n_n
Holy shit. This chapter...wow. The whole scene with Youko was intense, and Kurama and Reina just got shoved through the ringer again, didn't they? But I'm really glad she finally remembered him and how much she loved him, and what she'd sacrificed and endured for the sake of that love.
And I can barely believe that this story is drawing towards its close. I remember reading the original version and panicking when it got taken down from the sight, and then cheering when you put it back up. I'm emotionally invested in your story - I've really come to love it, since I've been following it for years. It will be sad to see it end, but at the same time, I'm just so excited for it, you know?
Great chapter. Really, just an emotionally evocative experience. n_n
11/24/2013 c30 2CaitlinIntolerant
I just read both stories up to this chapter and all I have to say is: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHH.
This is akin to torture! TYou're far too good at twisting the blade in my chest :( I hope to see an update soon, I've been looking forward to Youko and Reina interactions since they first met.
Thank you so much for this wonderful plot thus far.
2CaitlinIntolerantI just read both stories up to this chapter and all I have to say is: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHH.
This is akin to torture! TYou're far too good at twisting the blade in my chest :( I hope to see an update soon, I've been looking forward to Youko and Reina interactions since they first met.
Thank you so much for this wonderful plot thus far.
11/13/2013 c30 s3rendipitousrhyme
Oh my god, you have NO idea how frustrated I was when this chapter ended knowing that there are no more chapters currently out! You see, for the past few days I've sat on my butt almost doing nothing but continuously reading every chapter in this whole series non stop. As such, I'm sure you can tell how hooked your awesome writing and stories have me. lol Since I finally finished the latest chapter, I decided to drop a review telling you how brilliant a writer you are and how much I adore this series. Even though you asked about the poll a while ago, I also wanted to say that I'm fully in favor of another story in this series instead of the Jin one. Don't get me wrong, Jin's great but I couldn't bare the thought of this wonderful series ending anytime soon. lol
Oh my god, you have NO idea how frustrated I was when this chapter ended knowing that there are no more chapters currently out! You see, for the past few days I've sat on my butt almost doing nothing but continuously reading every chapter in this whole series non stop. As such, I'm sure you can tell how hooked your awesome writing and stories have me. lol Since I finally finished the latest chapter, I decided to drop a review telling you how brilliant a writer you are and how much I adore this series. Even though you asked about the poll a while ago, I also wanted to say that I'm fully in favor of another story in this series instead of the Jin one. Don't get me wrong, Jin's great but I couldn't bare the thought of this wonderful series ending anytime soon. lol