for Does It Have To Be Pink?8/3/2022 c8 Jollification8
A foursome, really? So much for being devoted and loving couples. Especially Quinchel, now it's all about the physical. So much so that they might was well just not even date, they should just be fuck buddies. And trying to put it off as them being drunk doesn't fly because you've already had Quinchel getting off on watching Brittana. Also that bit with Judy. So fucking moronic. Even fantasy fiction has to believable so that the reader can connect with it on one level or another. It's also really fucking gross. Who the fuck would do that, even when drunk!? You obviously have some issues regarding parents and their children's sex lives and it's nasty as fuck. Bye bye.
A foursome, really? So much for being devoted and loving couples. Especially Quinchel, now it's all about the physical. So much so that they might was well just not even date, they should just be fuck buddies. And trying to put it off as them being drunk doesn't fly because you've already had Quinchel getting off on watching Brittana. Also that bit with Judy. So fucking moronic. Even fantasy fiction has to believable so that the reader can connect with it on one level or another. It's also really fucking gross. Who the fuck would do that, even when drunk!? You obviously have some issues regarding parents and their children's sex lives and it's nasty as fuck. Bye bye.
8/3/2022 c7 Jollification8
I really could have done without the locker room scene, where Quinchel watched Brittana. Was creepy and about as erotic as Donald Trump. And talking of creepy, what's with Hiram's constant mentions of his daughters sex life?
I really could have done without the locker room scene, where Quinchel watched Brittana. Was creepy and about as erotic as Donald Trump. And talking of creepy, what's with Hiram's constant mentions of his daughters sex life?
4/12/2021 c6 allen r
great story but needs more focus on making quinn cum! she is the star of the story after all. i mean she is the queen goddess of everything lol.
great story but needs more focus on making quinn cum! she is the star of the story after all. i mean she is the queen goddess of everything lol.
2/11/2019 c18 Guest
Please say you will update and complete this
Please say you will update and complete this
2/16/2014 c18 
3RikkuKashi
Well I am certainly looking forward to whatever you plan to bring to the table where this story is concerned.
3RikkuKashiWell I am certainly looking forward to whatever you plan to bring to the table where this story is concerned.
1/4/2014 c18 Guest
Please update!
Please update!
11/25/2013 c18 mixtapesandcellmates
Take all the time you need. I hope everything gets better for you and your family. If you need to vent then you can always pm me.
Take all the time you need. I hope everything gets better for you and your family. If you need to vent then you can always pm me.
7/5/2013 c1 Guest
Oh wow, that was seriously funny!
Oh wow, that was seriously funny!
6/24/2013 c12 A.J.184
They said 'Life Is A Box Of Chocolates' in the movie Forrest Gump, just made me think of it. Plus I like the name of this chapter, and the one before.
They said 'Life Is A Box Of Chocolates' in the movie Forrest Gump, just made me think of it. Plus I like the name of this chapter, and the one before.