for Paperwork8/27/2020 c2 Guest
a good reader posts a review. (just kidding) this story was great thank you for sharing.
a good reader posts a review. (just kidding) this story was great thank you for sharing.
4/28/2018 c2 Guest
A good reader posts a review. A good reader posts a review. A good reader posts a review. A good- okay, I can't do this.
That was hilarious! I was laughing at every single sentence! Love it.
A good reader posts a review. A good reader posts a review. A good reader posts a review. A good- okay, I can't do this.
That was hilarious! I was laughing at every single sentence! Love it.
5/28/2017 c2 MM
Made me laugh.
Made me laugh.
1/6/2015 c2 
1Sherylyn
*snorfle* Oh, that's too priceless! I would seriously like an alternate-POV version of this — maybe Neal's or Diana's while the "fight" actually happens? Mostly, though, that's just so I can read even more about this, b/c it's delightfully addictive ;-)
1Sherylyn*snorfle* Oh, that's too priceless! I would seriously like an alternate-POV version of this — maybe Neal's or Diana's while the "fight" actually happens? Mostly, though, that's just so I can read even more about this, b/c it's delightfully addictive ;-)
11/29/2014 c2 whitecollarlife
What if said good reader reads a story that is years old? Does said good reader still have to post a review? And if said good reader posts a review on a story years old with no one likely to read it, is it really even a review? Stupid i know, but thats what love actually, is. Srry ramblin.
Anyways, nice and funny story. First I thought it was a video game they were playing and you were just faking us out, but nope, turns out it was a reall fight. Loved it, I'll have to check out your newer work, no?
What if said good reader reads a story that is years old? Does said good reader still have to post a review? And if said good reader posts a review on a story years old with no one likely to read it, is it really even a review? Stupid i know, but thats what love actually, is. Srry ramblin.
Anyways, nice and funny story. First I thought it was a video game they were playing and you were just faking us out, but nope, turns out it was a reall fight. Loved it, I'll have to check out your newer work, no?
8/14/2014 c2 2ocgirl.fr
Oh my god, this wash hilarious ! I can't stop giggling.
Seriously, this was genius ;)
2ocgirl.frOh my god, this wash hilarious ! I can't stop giggling.
Seriously, this was genius ;)
3/9/2014 c2 Guest
This is cuuute :D
I love neal getting beat up by diana; the trio are such siblings its hard to miss the oldest mature jones, the loyal badass dont-mess-with-her diana and the youngest mischievous incorrigible neal. speaking as someone who has a younger brother, i know how impossible they and their teasing can be.
Would you be willing to write another of such sorts? Maybe take on the sibling rivalry aspect again except write about a similar fight, except without anyone gettiing seriously hurt- maybe the childishness goes far enough that diana trips him to the ground, twists his arm behind his back and sits on him until he concedes defeat- old sibling style :D
And peter reacts with the same fond exasperation he usually reacts with around them :D
This is cuuute :D
I love neal getting beat up by diana; the trio are such siblings its hard to miss the oldest mature jones, the loyal badass dont-mess-with-her diana and the youngest mischievous incorrigible neal. speaking as someone who has a younger brother, i know how impossible they and their teasing can be.
Would you be willing to write another of such sorts? Maybe take on the sibling rivalry aspect again except write about a similar fight, except without anyone gettiing seriously hurt- maybe the childishness goes far enough that diana trips him to the ground, twists his arm behind his back and sits on him until he concedes defeat- old sibling style :D
And peter reacts with the same fond exasperation he usually reacts with around them :D
11/28/2013 c2 Umbra
I know it being a hole lot of time since you wrote this but as your messages said: a good reader posts a review so her it is:
Fantastic job! I was laughing so hard I started crying! This is probably the funniest fic I have ever read!
I know it being a hole lot of time since you wrote this but as your messages said: a good reader posts a review so her it is:
Fantastic job! I was laughing so hard I started crying! This is probably the funniest fic I have ever read!
2/18/2013 c2 8sugarart
I found it absolutely hysterical. To be honest I would love to see a prequel to this. There is just too much that really was left unsaid.
8sugarartI found it absolutely hysterical. To be honest I would love to see a prequel to this. There is just too much that really was left unsaid.
12/31/2012 c2 asdf
I haven't laughed so much in a long time. Thanks for writing this.
I haven't laughed so much in a long time. Thanks for writing this.