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1/25/2013 c21 1Carl Ogren
This story is the epitome of fanfiction
1/18/2013 c21 28Sonanoka21093
Hrm... I am quite confused, but I cannot say that I am not inrigued as to what chapter 20 held. Ahh well, there goes another story. Thinking back, I believe the thing I didn't like was the pacing; I felt as if the rate of power aquisition was far too high, and so it felt... I suppose it felt like a power trip of sorts. ...Although, I suppose in a sense that is what once you were going for. Anywho, as future advice, I suggest you slow down the development of the plot, and of the powers held by a protagonist, and instead make it a gradual slope. I for one find that that works quite well.

Ohh, and long time no see, if I'm not mistaken. Welcome back! Or is this a farewell? Either way, I do wish you luck in the future...
12/18/2012 c20 119WOLF99
Yukari was awesomely done.
XD
Good fic, but the end was kinda... meh.
9/22/2012 c19 Guest
This... is Persona and skipping so many chapters at once.
Seriously, how does this transition between the last chapter?
None of this makes sense.
NONE OF IT.
9/1/2012 c18 28Sonanoka21093
You know, if you lift the seal every time, even if only partially, it kinda defies the point of a seal in the first place... If it's as dangerous as Yukari says, I don't see why she would let him lessen a seal meant to keep Gensoukyo safe... Anywho, keep up the work, and I'll be sure to read the next.
8/29/2012 c17 Sonanoka21093
Ohh, cliff hanger! Quite the interesting chapter, though I've little to say, really. I enjoyed that Kogasa beat him, though! Go Kogasa! You're an EX mid-boss, and deserve to win fights from time to time! Anywho, keep up the great work!
8/23/2012 c16 Sonanoka21093
Heh, that was a damn cheesy one... Though, the period joke made me sigh and shake my head some, as, while they are rarely used in touhou, they do get SO old after the 50th one heard... Anywho, keep up the good work, and I look forward to more from you!
8/18/2012 c15 Neale
Yukari Master Troll.
8/18/2012 c11 Neale
That was so badass I don't even...
8/17/2012 c6 Neale
Yuka! :D

Your remarks make my day so badly.
8/17/2012 c5 Neale
You lost your points again? Suckah.
8/17/2012 c4 Neale
D'awww Marisa :3
8/17/2012 c3 Neale
Dun dun dun.
8/17/2012 c2 Neale
I love that ranking in the end.
8/17/2012 c1 Neale
IT'S YOU.

YOUUUU.

I WILL LOVE THIS FOREVER.
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