
4/8 c19 Bansh33
Love the story and especially the fact that youre building Percys and Artemis' relationship on a past that they dont have canonically instead of just shoving it in there somehow.
Also PLEASE come back again id hate to see this story waste away or be stolen by someone of lesser talent
Love the story and especially the fact that youre building Percys and Artemis' relationship on a past that they dont have canonically instead of just shoving it in there somehow.
Also PLEASE come back again id hate to see this story waste away or be stolen by someone of lesser talent
3/29 c17
5Raven's Arrow
When are you coming back. It's been nine years since a real update to this story. This was such a good story.

When are you coming back. It's been nine years since a real update to this story. This was such a good story.
2/22 c19 Guest
Hey are you okay?
Hey are you okay?
2/12 c19 Grrrrr
its been years dum dum
its been years dum dum
11/28/2024 c19 AkerinSilver
I love this story and i am sad that it has not been worked on in a long time
I love this story and i am sad that it has not been worked on in a long time
11/12/2024 c19 Guest
I wish she/he would update
I wish she/he would update
10/13/2024 c1 Zinovia
I have a friend at school whose name is Zayden. I saw the title, and I was like, “Oh my fucking god, I completely forgot about this.” Yeah, my friend is really short. He’s like, at my shoulder. Other than that, this is extremely well written, and I love it so far.
I have a friend at school whose name is Zayden. I saw the title, and I was like, “Oh my fucking god, I completely forgot about this.” Yeah, my friend is really short. He’s like, at my shoulder. Other than that, this is extremely well written, and I love it so far.
10/13/2024 c19 John
Miss, (I think),
l really like your book. I really do. So what I am gonna do is write a review every frickin day until l you continue, or give me consent to finish it. Ofc my real name is not John, but you can address me by that.
Good Yard
John,
Miss, (I think),
l really like your book. I really do. So what I am gonna do is write a review every frickin day until l you continue, or give me consent to finish it. Ofc my real name is not John, but you can address me by that.
Good Yard
John,
10/9/2024 c19 Pertemisfourever
Miss, (I think),
l really like your book. I really do. So what I am gonna do is write a review every frickin day until l you continue, or give me consent to finish it. Ofc my real name is not John, but you can address me by that.
Good Yard
John,
Miss, (I think),
l really like your book. I really do. So what I am gonna do is write a review every frickin day until l you continue, or give me consent to finish it. Ofc my real name is not John, but you can address me by that.
Good Yard
John,
9/24/2024 c19 Dmoney2204
So that was a fucking lie leves for 4 years gets mad people thing he has abandoned his fics so they build off of it then disappears for 4 more years. Your obviously not coming back so why even bother posting the author’s note
So that was a fucking lie leves for 4 years gets mad people thing he has abandoned his fics so they build off of it then disappears for 4 more years. Your obviously not coming back so why even bother posting the author’s note
8/22/2024 c18
1KINGShaheed
When did he tell his mom? Wasn’t he just on his way to do that but couldn’t? Aside from that, finally! Been waiting for the reveal for a while, shame this is the last chapter so it's kind of moot... Oh well, cool story you got here, for the most part.

When did he tell his mom? Wasn’t he just on his way to do that but couldn’t? Aside from that, finally! Been waiting for the reveal for a while, shame this is the last chapter so it's kind of moot... Oh well, cool story you got here, for the most part.