
7/6/2012 c3 Guest
Liking the story so far, please keep writing:)
Liking the story so far, please keep writing:)
7/6/2012 c3
25emmettismymonkeyman
Ugh, i am a little disturbed by teenage age siblings in a shower, when one is clothed and the other is not. well since i dont really understand alot about the whole subject of sibling relations.. idk, write more..

Ugh, i am a little disturbed by teenage age siblings in a shower, when one is clothed and the other is not. well since i dont really understand alot about the whole subject of sibling relations.. idk, write more..
7/6/2012 c2 emmettismymonkeyman
well a curious chapter, for sure. ill keep reading, if you will keep writing.
well a curious chapter, for sure. ill keep reading, if you will keep writing.
7/6/2012 c1 emmettismymonkeyman
well i hope you dont have them as sex or get feeling until they are older. yeah, ill read on but with caution.
well i hope you dont have them as sex or get feeling until they are older. yeah, ill read on but with caution.
7/6/2012 c2
7BlowYouAway
Random and different but in a good way. Is this complete? If not you should continue!

Random and different but in a good way. Is this complete? If not you should continue!
7/6/2012 c1 Guest
Would've loved this as an Alice/Edward :/
Would've loved this as an Alice/Edward :/