
7/24/2012 c1 L
Awesome story, one of my favourites
Awesome story, one of my favourites
7/15/2012 c2 coolgirl
keep writing
keep writing
7/14/2012 c2 Animefreak8
Hahaha I like it! But it to rushed but it is slowly getting there:) I Hope you will Update Soon:D
Hahaha I like it! But it to rushed but it is slowly getting there:) I Hope you will Update Soon:D
7/15/2012 c2
2Moon Princess016
Haha! Oh Spirit! Whatever shall we do with you?
Oh, and thanks for the review on my story! It's kinda annoying when people read it but never comment so thanks for being the first to do so!

Haha! Oh Spirit! Whatever shall we do with you?
Oh, and thanks for the review on my story! It's kinda annoying when people read it but never comment so thanks for being the first to do so!
7/10/2012 c1 Guest
Continue :D
Continue :D
7/9/2012 c1 alycatt16
Hahahahahaha funny wasn't expecting that! Good job plus extra great job! :D
Hahahahahaha funny wasn't expecting that! Good job plus extra great job! :D
7/7/2012 c1 Guest
CONTINUE IT:D this is a great story!
CONTINUE IT:D this is a great story!
7/6/2012 c1 Guest
It was a LITTLE fast, you should have made us all wait until somewhere around the next chapter to spill the beans about what was going on between them, the girls being police officers and the boys drug dealing. Throughout it I had only a slight hinge of what was going on. My dense-ness :). Or maybe you're just that good at building it up. Like I said, a little bit fast but it was very good and it interested me a lot, since I don't usually go for song fics. Hurry and UPDATE!
It was a LITTLE fast, you should have made us all wait until somewhere around the next chapter to spill the beans about what was going on between them, the girls being police officers and the boys drug dealing. Throughout it I had only a slight hinge of what was going on. My dense-ness :). Or maybe you're just that good at building it up. Like I said, a little bit fast but it was very good and it interested me a lot, since I don't usually go for song fics. Hurry and UPDATE!