for Silence Broken2/24/2013 c1 
3Yorushike
Hi,
this story is quite well written, although I would have liked to see a bit more happening. Almost half of the story only replayes what we already knew and the other half added almost nothing new. I wasn't able to find a message beyond the fact that the people were grateful for the rescue and we read about that in the book. Maybe I missed something?
Greetings Yorushike
3YorushikeHi,
this story is quite well written, although I would have liked to see a bit more happening. Almost half of the story only replayes what we already knew and the other half added almost nothing new. I wasn't able to find a message beyond the fact that the people were grateful for the rescue and we read about that in the book. Maybe I missed something?
Greetings Yorushike
7/8/2012 c1 63general zargon
I reviewed this story before, and I shall do it again! I really enjoyed this one-shot, and I think you wrote Darling's personality really well, so kudos for that! I hope you decide to write more for the League fandom! Are you planning anything with Ture and Maris, by any chance? LOL. :) Please keep up the excellent work!
63general zargonI reviewed this story before, and I shall do it again! I really enjoyed this one-shot, and I think you wrote Darling's personality really well, so kudos for that! I hope you decide to write more for the League fandom! Are you planning anything with Ture and Maris, by any chance? LOL. :) Please keep up the excellent work!