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7/16/2012 c3 SpartanLeader669
Amazing story with great characters, please keep updating
7/14/2012 c1 22Haley Earthstone
I only noticed a couple of spelling errors of the rather common variety towards the end, but they aren't really worth pointing out. It was a good start, Dantes. A very good start. Caught my attention with that intro real good. And you kept it with the rest of the chapter. Good work, ner vod. I must say, Jack is the most interesting character by far.
7/14/2012 c3 4Rowboatt
Few Key Points I want to Identify Here:

1.) Ho. Shit.

2.) FFFF- adventure and romance; I LOVE ETTT.

Okay. Key points identified. Onto constructive feedback:
-Your use in descriptive words is in proper context and nothing is so complicated that I have to look it up on . xD Um...the characters are so much fun and they have their own little perspectives/quirks, which you know I am a big fan for.
-Only suggy or suggestion or whatever is that maybe you dip a little bit more into Jack's thoughts? He's by far my favorite character and I kind of want to know more of what he feels, what he thinks...

Other than that, your story is fantastic and you better update soon! D

-LadyDynamite312

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