for Crave5/14 c13 Guest
Amo tu manera de escribir, de verdad que me encanta. Gracias ️
Amo tu manera de escribir, de verdad que me encanta. Gracias ️
1/15 c23 Chloefelger
Omg the way I spend the whole day procrastinating because I didn’t want to finish this book. You’re books are always such a pleasure to read and I absolutely love everything about this book
Omg the way I spend the whole day procrastinating because I didn’t want to finish this book. You’re books are always such a pleasure to read and I absolutely love everything about this book
11/30/2024 c5 Guest
BITCH YOU DID NOT JUST MAKE HIME LEAPFROG BLY
BITCH YOU DID NOT JUST MAKE HIME LEAPFROG BLY
9/28/2024 c4 Momo206
Another fantastic chapter! I love your depiction of the La Push boys' experience. It definitely was an area that wasn't delved into adequately and realistically in the origin story.
Another fantastic chapter! I love your depiction of the La Push boys' experience. It definitely was an area that wasn't delved into adequately and realistically in the origin story.
8/14/2024 c23 paulieandgilbert
Is it safe to assume the reason that you have left fanfiction is because you've upgraded to professional author and are now properly appreciated and paid for your work? It wouldn't surprise me in the least.
I've certainly enjoyed rummaging through your impressive writing immensely!
Thank you so much for allowing us to browse through your imagination. Personally, I love it here!
Is it safe to assume the reason that you have left fanfiction is because you've upgraded to professional author and are now properly appreciated and paid for your work? It wouldn't surprise me in the least.
I've certainly enjoyed rummaging through your impressive writing immensely!
Thank you so much for allowing us to browse through your imagination. Personally, I love it here!
8/12/2024 c10 paulieandgilbert
I've gotta say, this story is so-far perfectly balanced. I mean it's highly descriptive without being verbose. The vocabulary is relaxed without being lowbrow. The fight scenes are intense without being too angsty. And there hasn't been any lemons as of yet, though it almost feels like there has!
I'm certainly impressed! Aside from a multitude of typos which you already told us to expect, I'm ready to declare this a perfect story. (so far.)
I've gotta say, this story is so-far perfectly balanced. I mean it's highly descriptive without being verbose. The vocabulary is relaxed without being lowbrow. The fight scenes are intense without being too angsty. And there hasn't been any lemons as of yet, though it almost feels like there has!
I'm certainly impressed! Aside from a multitude of typos which you already told us to expect, I'm ready to declare this a perfect story. (so far.)
8/10/2024 c3 paulieandgilbert
Amazing, horrifying and heartbreaking all at the same time! I didn't know that was possible. Great job!
Amazing, horrifying and heartbreaking all at the same time! I didn't know that was possible. Great job!
8/10/2024 c1 paulieandgilbert
Wow! Definitely not anything I've read before! This certainly has my attention now. I'm in!
Wow! Definitely not anything I've read before! This certainly has my attention now. I'm in!
8/8/2024 c1 Guest
Rip Taoistelf
A wordsmith, an amazing author, the best writer
2015
Rip Taoistelf
A wordsmith, an amazing author, the best writer
2015
7/21/2024 c5 Wakaflakawalker
Oh. My. Word. Besides The Movement of the Earth on AO3, /this/ is going to be one of my favorites. The intensity of Jacob in this is so original and WELL WRITTEN. I’m so excited for the rest of this.
Oh. My. Word. Besides The Movement of the Earth on AO3, /this/ is going to be one of my favorites. The intensity of Jacob in this is so original and WELL WRITTEN. I’m so excited for the rest of this.
6/2/2024 c6 Guest
Finally an interaction with the cullens
Finally an interaction with the cullens
6/2/2024 c3 Guest
This is so tense, I love alpha jacob, and I love paul's attitude lol. I hope they fight the and kill the cullens
This is so tense, I love alpha jacob, and I love paul's attitude lol. I hope they fight the and kill the cullens