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7/8/2013 c1 amr29
This is great, it would be hot to see some forbidden love between them.
1/22/2013 c1 1RedNeko22
More please!
10/14/2012 c1 Guest
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8/9/2012 c1 4kokorovase
It was good, and hey I favorited the story! It really was awesome :))
7/10/2012 c1 15StrawberryDream15
Never have I read a story like this before. Those two as siblings? Wow, this is gonna be very entertaining to read! Brilliant, my friend! :DD

Hm, it was okay. A few minor mistakes here and there with grammar and spelling. But overall, I thought it was fine. :)

Great start! Absolutely love it. Keep going with this, and I'll go check out that poll! XD
7/10/2012 c1 38Mikashimotaku
Oooh! This actually sounds SO cool! I mean, the idea is so... Interesting. It's fresh and exciting and nothing like I've ever read before. It's originality is enough to make me want more! :)

Great job. You have a few minor spelling errors, such as 'prooved' should be 'proved'. But that's really it. All I can say is, add more detail because it just adds to a story a whole lot! But great job. Please update this story! :)
7/10/2012 c1 Kimmiko T
I love this story!
It's really interesting!
Please update soon!
Thanx!

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