
8/15/2014 c1
9Daphmir57
Debatable. It was funny-wunny, but a tad...it just could've been executed better.

Debatable. It was funny-wunny, but a tad...it just could've been executed better.
6/30/2014 c1
4Danny-Shells
That was wild the whole way through. The ending with Steve especially made me laugh.

That was wild the whole way through. The ending with Steve especially made me laugh.
10/17/2012 c1 DarkWhite
Loved the story. Really funny when Teo-Bit came up and wacked Ponyboy in the head with the frying pan. Thought I thought he was drunk? Still really funny with the frying pan though. Loved the story. If reading this review before u read the story, READ IT NOW!
Loved the story. Really funny when Teo-Bit came up and wacked Ponyboy in the head with the frying pan. Thought I thought he was drunk? Still really funny with the frying pan though. Loved the story. If reading this review before u read the story, READ IT NOW!
10/9/2012 c1 Jenna
THE FRYING PAN! Lol this was hilarious!
THE FRYING PAN! Lol this was hilarious!
9/6/2012 c1
9mylobear
That was really good. I love compleat light hearted story's. It's was also funny when Steve asked pony his name... Ya, made me laugh:) well written.

That was really good. I love compleat light hearted story's. It's was also funny when Steve asked pony his name... Ya, made me laugh:) well written.
9/2/2012 c1 Natalie
dafudge Did I just read? I liked it though! I needed a laugh!
dafudge Did I just read? I liked it though! I needed a laugh!
9/2/2012 c1 Natalie
Dafudge did I just read? I liked it though. I needed a laugh!
Dafudge did I just read? I liked it though. I needed a laugh!
7/27/2012 c1 Guest
Haha, the classic hit-on-the-head cure! Loved it!
Haha, the classic hit-on-the-head cure! Loved it!
7/12/2012 c1
8kitkatieisme
That was probably the most entertaining thing I read in a while. :) Nice job! I loved the story!

That was probably the most entertaining thing I read in a while. :) Nice job! I loved the story!