for Why Did It Have To Be Her?11/30/2017 c1 
1cathern.cain
I could see this as an intro to kind of an AU story with Hermione and the Twins. Kind of like her only feeling safe around them because of what happened till she gets her feet back under her, then her becoming strong enough to be a bad ass.
1cathern.cainI could see this as an intro to kind of an AU story with Hermione and the Twins. Kind of like her only feeling safe around them because of what happened till she gets her feet back under her, then her becoming strong enough to be a bad ass.
6/26/2017 c1 Guest
It's pretty good but at the end she shouldn't be wanting to kill him, he just violated her, hurt her, and took her innocence, she should be afraid of him. Other than that it's great-sad but still good. Please continue.
It's pretty good but at the end she shouldn't be wanting to kill him, he just violated her, hurt her, and took her innocence, she should be afraid of him. Other than that it's great-sad but still good. Please continue.
6/2/2015 c1 Pussycat Pippin
I am disappointed that you just ended it like that. It could have been a great story but you just ended it and left use your readers with a bunch of unanswered questions which in my personal opinion is TOLDALY NASTY AND INCREADABLEY RUDE of you. How can you say this is a Fred and Hermione Fanfiction wen you left it it ending it with will nothing quite honestly that they would be together. I mean maybe if you had Fred being the one to use his cloak and say in his mind I'm going to kill the bastard who did this or if it was just him hugging her then ya maybe it would have been some clue although you still have left you readers with a bunch of unanswered questions. But you did notdid you? No it was George who who was the one that took off his cloak and it was both who said in their minds I'm going to kill the bastard who did this and both hug her. I would have love to say that I loved this story but how can I for you just end it as if it was nothing . And that is upsiting for it is a great starter, to what could have been a great story or at least better then this. Sorry for the rudeness of this review but that is just how I fell please live long and happy good day.
I am disappointed that you just ended it like that. It could have been a great story but you just ended it and left use your readers with a bunch of unanswered questions which in my personal opinion is TOLDALY NASTY AND INCREADABLEY RUDE of you. How can you say this is a Fred and Hermione Fanfiction wen you left it it ending it with will nothing quite honestly that they would be together. I mean maybe if you had Fred being the one to use his cloak and say in his mind I'm going to kill the bastard who did this or if it was just him hugging her then ya maybe it would have been some clue although you still have left you readers with a bunch of unanswered questions. But you did notdid you? No it was George who who was the one that took off his cloak and it was both who said in their minds I'm going to kill the bastard who did this and both hug her. I would have love to say that I loved this story but how can I for you just end it as if it was nothing . And that is upsiting for it is a great starter, to what could have been a great story or at least better then this. Sorry for the rudeness of this review but that is just how I fell please live long and happy good day.
8/16/2013 c1 RandomReviewer
A PART TWO PLEASE. I WANT TO SEE THE TWINS BE ALL SWEET AND PROTECTIVE AND UNDERSTANDING. PLEASE.
A PART TWO PLEASE. I WANT TO SEE THE TWINS BE ALL SWEET AND PROTECTIVE AND UNDERSTANDING. PLEASE.
1/24/2013 c1 carry-on-my-wayward-reader
oooh! please continue the story pleasse please please, pretty please with cherries on top! :)
oooh! please continue the story pleasse please please, pretty please with cherries on top! :)
9/13/2012 c1 Mrs. Theodore Nott
AAAAGGGHHH! I HATE YOU!
URRGHHH! ABSXDQFIGNHJWKZCK!
Uuuuughhh. *long sigh* Now that that's all out.
How could you just leave this hanging like this? Uuugh, uuurrrrg, *thinks in head* No girl, stop the freakout before it happens...
Pheeeeeeeew, I'm sorry. Ignore my craziness.
This was a really good story. I was actually tearing up slightly, and it's such a short oneshot. :P Pleaaaaaaaaaase make a sequeeeeellllll! *whiiiiiine*
AAAAGGGHHH! I HATE YOU!
URRGHHH! ABSXDQFIGNHJWKZCK!
Uuuuughhh. *long sigh* Now that that's all out.
How could you just leave this hanging like this? Uuugh, uuurrrrg, *thinks in head* No girl, stop the freakout before it happens...
Pheeeeeeeew, I'm sorry. Ignore my craziness.
This was a really good story. I was actually tearing up slightly, and it's such a short oneshot. :P Pleaaaaaaaaaase make a sequeeeeellllll! *whiiiiiine*
8/17/2012 c1 Ao
This is a really interesting story, I think you should write more! Please! I can't wait!
This is a really interesting story, I think you should write more! Please! I can't wait!