for 18th Rose7/13/2012 c1 mercury
Please write a 2 shot. This is really good, plus you actually use proper grammer. Thank you.
Please write a 2 shot. This is really good, plus you actually use proper grammer. Thank you.
7/13/2012 c1 Guest
Please continue! It is very good, but I think you should make the spark between Percy and Annabeth show more or else readers will be confused on how and why they fell in love.
Please continue! It is very good, but I think you should make the spark between Percy and Annabeth show more or else readers will be confused on how and why they fell in love.
7/13/2012 c1 Greeks vs Geeks
i loved the story. it was even better with the music playing in the background. awesome story! keep it up!
i loved the story. it was even better with the music playing in the background. awesome story! keep it up!
7/13/2012 c1 
3The Cloaked Witch
It's a great story, beautifully written. I spotted one error ("Maybe Percy did memorized her number." should be "Maybe Percy memorized her number.") but it was minor. I loved it, great job!
3The Cloaked WitchIt's a great story, beautifully written. I spotted one error ("Maybe Percy did memorized her number." should be "Maybe Percy memorized her number.") but it was minor. I loved it, great job!