for Slipping Away12/26/2012 c1 
1nerd in me
love love love your stories although this one i way more relatable to me the nerd the average remeber everything nerd
1nerd in melove love love your stories although this one i way more relatable to me the nerd the average remeber everything nerd
12/17/2012 c10 18BlueEyedCountryGirl
Can't wait to see what happens when Kelly wakes up. great chapter, update soon.
18BlueEyedCountryGirlCan't wait to see what happens when Kelly wakes up. great chapter, update soon.
10/23/2012 c9 2pyre-of-hellfire
This story is great! i never read an embry/oc story before and this is so cuuutee! its how i imagined embry from the book! :) great writing! 3
2pyre-of-hellfireThis story is great! i never read an embry/oc story before and this is so cuuutee! its how i imagined embry from the book! :) great writing! 3
10/22/2012 c9 2lytebrytehybrid88
wow i was worried there for a minute. that poor girl is gonna lose her mind if she keeps running away like that. so will the jacob and nessie story tie into the rest of the stories because i really wanna know what he did that is so bad that she is running away from him but still staying around him for pack things.
2lytebrytehybrid88wow i was worried there for a minute. that poor girl is gonna lose her mind if she keeps running away like that. so will the jacob and nessie story tie into the rest of the stories because i really wanna know what he did that is so bad that she is running away from him but still staying around him for pack things.
10/14/2012 c7 2lytebrytehybrid88
This is funny but sweet at the same time. I've done inner monologues before and I sorta had to laugh when she went off about the spider too. Are you gonna do one with jake and ness cause they keep popping up in everyone's lives.
2lytebrytehybrid88This is funny but sweet at the same time. I've done inner monologues before and I sorta had to laugh when she went off about the spider too. Are you gonna do one with jake and ness cause they keep popping up in everyone's lives.
9/23/2012 c7 18BlueEyedCountryGirl
Great chapter. So glad she admitted how she felt about him and that he told her as well. update soon
18BlueEyedCountryGirlGreat chapter. So glad she admitted how she felt about him and that he told her as well. update soon
8/22/2012 c5 18BlueEyedCountryGirl
Great chapter. Glad she's trying to be friends with him again. Update soon.
18BlueEyedCountryGirlGreat chapter. Glad she's trying to be friends with him again. Update soon.