
11/6/2013 c1 the burnt Huxley
*takes of hat*
May they rest forever in the place they will all call home , and that they may see and live in peace.
-Lt Colonel William Smith.
(Note: you could have done one for "In Flanders Fields" )
*takes of hat*
May they rest forever in the place they will all call home , and that they may see and live in peace.
-Lt Colonel William Smith.
(Note: you could have done one for "In Flanders Fields" )
2/1/2013 c1
25Cmdr. Gen. Marasco
You forgot to mention the mass of obliterated Germans on the other side of the field.

You forgot to mention the mass of obliterated Germans on the other side of the field.
10/23/2012 c1 yay
This was depressing but nicely written.
This was depressing but nicely written.
9/29/2012 c1 K
Actually, how you depicted it works. As I understand it, the bodies are not wrapped in American flags. American flags are over the bodies before the bodies are titled and sent into the ocean, but the flags are then folded. So what I'm saying is this; don't worry, you done good.
Actually, how you depicted it works. As I understand it, the bodies are not wrapped in American flags. American flags are over the bodies before the bodies are titled and sent into the ocean, but the flags are then folded. So what I'm saying is this; don't worry, you done good.
7/26/2012 c1 Smart Girl
PLEASE!
P.S. I love this. It's so... sweet.
PLEASE!
P.S. I love this. It's so... sweet.
7/19/2012 c1
1wordsequalmagic
Wow...
This is really a good story for Memorial Day. I really liked how you connected the colors to the scene. I honestly enjoyed it!

Wow...
This is really a good story for Memorial Day. I really liked how you connected the colors to the scene. I honestly enjoyed it!
7/17/2012 c1 Smart Girl
What about innocence for white? Or did you want something physical?
What about innocence for white? Or did you want something physical?