for Pokemon: New Generation, New Heroes12/23/2012 c6 
9WhatATangledWebSheWeaves
The battle scene was very good Srry that college threw you for a loop. I've been pretty busy myself... Lol
9WhatATangledWebSheWeavesThe battle scene was very good Srry that college threw you for a loop. I've been pretty busy myself... Lol
7/30/2012 c5 WhatATangledWebSheWeaves
Wow, that was quick... Nice battle scene btw Good luck with college!
Wow, that was quick... Nice battle scene btw Good luck with college!
7/29/2012 c4 WhatATangledWebSheWeaves
Aw! That Pidgey was so cute Hopefully, Pierce will get his act together soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Aw! That Pidgey was so cute Hopefully, Pierce will get his act together soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/26/2012 c3 9WhatATangledWebSheWeaves
I always thought that Caterpie was a cutie too Can't wait for the next chapter
9WhatATangledWebSheWeavesI always thought that Caterpie was a cutie too Can't wait for the next chapter
7/25/2012 c2 4Ravinae
I love the concept so far and i can't wait to see how Riley's parentage will affect her travels later on! keep updating! i'll be waiting :)
4RavinaeI love the concept so far and i can't wait to see how Riley's parentage will affect her travels later on! keep updating! i'll be waiting :)
7/25/2012 c2 9WhatATangledWebSheWeaves
Hey, did you change Rika's attack from Shock Wave to Thunder Wave? Cuz if you did, it actually makes more sense Can't wait for the next chapter
9WhatATangledWebSheWeavesHey, did you change Rika's attack from Shock Wave to Thunder Wave? Cuz if you did, it actually makes more sense Can't wait for the next chapter
7/25/2012 c1 WhatATangledWebSheWeaves
Glad to see you were able to move your story :) Can't wait to read more
Glad to see you were able to move your story :) Can't wait to read more