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3/12/2016 c2 33blendee
Looking forward to the next chapter.
5/1/2014 c2 Chibidragon421
Why did Flan die?! Whyyyy!? Sorry, I'm a big Flandre fan. But anyway, good story! Keep up the good work! It captured my imagination, in a way much like a novel! I really enjoyed the story. (Although, I did freak out when Flan-chan died. *sniffle*) oh and try not to repeat words too much. For example, instead of paranoia, try panic or insanity attack. This way, you don't wear out the reader's excitement by being tedious. Good Job though!
7/20/2012 c1 8Mephiles666
HAH! The doll is the killer! *puff up chest*

I saw a grammar error but I forgot what it was. As for the story itself, I like it.

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