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this was a graet story overall! i wouldv likeed it more streched out with more detail but all in all i like the plot. i would suggest going back and editin/revising to help the story flow better but good go at it. i love bella jazz fics
this was a graet story overall! i wouldv likeed it more streched out with more detail but all in all i like the plot. i would suggest going back and editin/revising to help the story flow better but good go at it. i love bella jazz fics
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