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6/12/2015 c3 Guest
it was amazing more please!
9/11/2012 c3 6bloody raptor
fantastic please continue.
8/26/2012 c3 1XxMIDNIGHTDREAMSxX
Amazing! I can't what tell next chapter
8/21/2012 c3 85sweetsheart
I think your writing style is gorgeous and the idea of this story is great. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this, keep it up.
8/19/2012 c3 16The Reality DumPer
That was fantastic.
Hmm...I think the plot has really somewhere to turn to.
And if mature contents are necessary, why not?
I don't think you have to change the rating. It's good enough like that.
Keep writing! :)
8/19/2012 c3 116Lialane Graest
Worth the wait. It's not normal that I devour a fanfic like I did this one. I absolutely loved it!
8/6/2012 c2 4Kaita the Creeper
Woah total cliffhanger. This is awesome I love it! Please please pleeeeaase continue this! I beg of you
7/25/2012 c2 1XxMIDNIGHTDREAMSxX
7/20/2012 c2 116Lialane Graest
Now that was a nice way to end that chapter :)

The only complaint that I have at all is that the structuring is, no offense, a bit messy. Try starting a new paragraph when you're switching from person to person speaking and maybe, since there's no indentation, leaving a space between paragraphs, it'll make it easier to read and cleaner looking.

But don't get me wrong, I love the story so far :)
7/16/2012 c1 Lialane Graest
I'm quite interested in this as well, left me hanging with the Marie portion, would love to see another chapter.
7/16/2012 c1 underneththemoon
WOW! I love your story! You have such a unique way of writing(unique in the good way lol). And I really want you to continue...please!

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