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7/18/2012 c1 Guest
Your description of Emily sweating hits very close to home as hot as it's been lately. I usually don't read stories that follow perfectly with tv episodes, but this is a drabble. It's a very fitting description of that scene full of sweat, fear, and determination. That was a great episode! There are a couple of run-on sentences and sentence fragments that can easily be fixed. All in all ... I liked it. It was definitely a shining Prentiss moment.

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