for Thirst12/20/2019 c1 Guest
That was really good for the first one!
That was really good for the first one!
8/25/2019 c1 catspats31
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
You should remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like AdultFanfiction.
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
You should remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like AdultFanfiction.
3/31/2014 c1 Guest
LOVE IT !
10/ 10
LOVE IT !
10/ 10
17/18/2013 c1 Finalps3
Good story
Good story
7/21/2012 c1 japankawaiinee
No errors so far :] good job on your first story. Continue writing more!:D
No errors so far :] good job on your first story. Continue writing more!:D
7/17/2012 c1 Xx4tuneCookieXx
Gosh..this is the best lemon story and one of my favorites so far.. Good job on your first story! Hope you make more stories :]
Gosh..this is the best lemon story and one of my favorites so far.. Good job on your first story! Hope you make more stories :]